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12/20/2002 02:15:18 PM |
Critique Club
#66
Composition/Content - For me, the composition could be improved ever so slightly. I'd opt for a wider view... that is, I'd like to be able to see a little of what's to the left and right of the dogs. I like the concept and the sentiment of the image. The dogs strike me more as being the "subject" of the image than "motion".
Background - perfect for this subject. I'm happy with the sky taking up about 1/3 of the background with the land taking the other 2/3.
Camera Work Technical - Creatively and compositionally this image is substantially more than a snapshot. Technically, its not clear to me that you made any adjustments away from the point and shoot default settings. For example, blurring the background while keeping the dogs in focus might've improved the photo.
Digital Processing - Technical - I'm not sure what i'd do differently. Nothing strikes me negatively or significantly positively.
Opinion - I enjoy looking at the shot. I'm not sure about the title, though. I'm not sure from which dog is "I" . I would've assumed that "I" is the jumper, but I'm not sure since I don't see anything heading into his/her mouth.
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12/15/2002 10:38:09 AM |
| wow, the little border collie? looks cool. good stop motion, just a bit bright. |
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12/15/2002 06:06:42 AM |
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12/13/2002 12:32:50 AM |
| The little dog looks pretty mad. Good capture of the big dog in the air. - Inspzil |
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12/12/2002 09:15:05 PM |
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12/12/2002 04:42:12 PM |
| U think thats cool my dog can juggle. Na joaks cool shot 7 nice focus and stuff |
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12/12/2002 03:18:48 PM |
| That is a serious vertical jump on that dog. He definately had to have been in motion. The angle and framing/cropping are ok, maybe cropped just a tad close to the dog of the right. The lighting is good, and your focus and clarity seen to be just fine to me as well. Good luck in the challenge. |
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12/12/2002 03:38:34 AM |
| Good job catching the dog in the air. So far I have only been able to catch my dog sleeping on the floor. He's not the "motion" kind of critter. 7 waltoml. |
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12/11/2002 07:00:34 PM |
1)Does the Photo fit the Challenge? (5)
2)Color:6
3)Composition:6
4)Focus:(5)
5)Background(5)
6)Lighting(6)
7)Does the Title fit the picture? (4)
Overall Score=5.28 Rounded to 5
This dog is not playing fetch as to what I cna see it look. Looks like he is being frightened by this other dog. |
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12/11/2002 05:40:29 PM |
| Great candid shot, a little too busy in the background though. |
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12/10/2002 07:50:08 AM |
| Vicious looking little doggy you have there. |
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12/10/2002 01:34:09 AM |
| Great action shot. I like it. Jacko. 7 |
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12/09/2002 07:00:48 PM |
| THis is certainly one of the more interesting shot - I keep wondering - what are they jumping about for? |
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12/09/2002 06:47:25 PM |
| nice capture of hte moment. It would have been better if the frisbee (or whatever was being thrown) was in the shot though. |
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12/09/2002 04:19:22 PM |
| nice capture--image could have a little more contrast and color--9 |
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12/09/2002 06:51:59 AM |
| Wow look at the teeth on that meanie! Dont want to piss him off.... |
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12/09/2002 03:46:24 AM |
| not really getting much of a sense of motion from the photo |
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