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06/08/2011 03:43:21 PM |
| YaY!!! Thanks Frank! My first ever Critique Club visit! Great insights :D This was a great challenge I learned a lot from and your critique adds to the education. Thanks for stopping by! |
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06/07/2011 11:39:55 PM |
Hi Nathan, Welcome to the Critique Zone!
Congratulations on the image - there are not many in this challenge who have managed to get such a rich b/w and really pump the contrasts like this - it is really gripping.
Technically: There is really nothing to say here, even with 20/20 hindsight I cannot find something that I would change.
Artistically: More of a grey area (no pun intended!). The balance is great, the positioning of your (unintentional?) model looks spot on to me, but the slightly tilted looking perspective just seems a little forced. Can't quite put my finger on it. The top of the image is also a little cramped - I like the stairs there to frame it, but perhaps pulling back a little so that more of them appears? Or shooting from the bottom so that they go right to the bottom left? This wall could be a rich seam of shots to mine!
Happy hunting,
Frank. |
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06/02/2011 04:50:48 PM |
| This looks a heck of a lot like where I used to live in Seattle. hmmmm Very cool shot. |
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06/02/2011 04:08:57 PM |
| I'm liking the wide angle and the shadows. Great image - glad to see the person included. |
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06/02/2011 04:52:21 AM |
| Back to comment... I won't guess whether this was a set up shot or you actually caught this person in the act. LOL! Nicely done. |
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06/01/2011 10:32:10 PM |
| I Hate Graffitti with a passion, nice shot though. |
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05/31/2011 07:53:09 PM |
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05/29/2011 12:18:55 PM |
| Nice angle, great contrast. I like the starts and the depth they create, if that makes sense. Very good. |
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05/27/2011 07:46:27 PM |
| I do wonder what HCB would make of the wealth of graffiti these days. I like the energy of the angle and the excellent contrast here - nice work in camera with that. |
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05/27/2011 07:12:17 AM |
| Gorgeous. I love graffiti shots. The stairs above are perfect. |
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05/26/2011 09:05:23 PM |
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