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12/16/2002 05:00:14 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club --
Nice motion capture that effectively shows the power behind the waves. I really like how your photograph seems to freeze the spray at it's maximum height. The color of the water is also beautiful and a nice contrast to the gray of the rocks.
I wonder if a different perspective might allow the viewer to better see the height of the spray? The upper right and lower left of the photograph don't really add much to the current composition. Would it be possible to move closer to the water, with your line of sight down the length of the breakwall? [I realize this might not be possible with the water spray making it difficult to get a clear photograph]
The focus on the rocks seems a little soft -- is this due to the water spray? If at all possible it would be nice to achieve a tight focus on the rocks, to provide further contrast between the rocks and water. Overall a nice motion capture!
LanSnake |
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12/15/2002 06:47:28 PM |
| Good stop motion. Good colors too, but focus is a little soft. |
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12/15/2002 06:43:06 AM |
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12/14/2002 06:47:58 AM |
| Needs a subject, eg, a boat, bouy, bird, person etc. I Like the mist captured in the bottom right corner. |
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12/10/2002 01:27:06 AM |
| Wish I was there dude. Nothing but forzen water here. Good Capture. Jacko |
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12/09/2002 09:58:45 AM |
| Nature's liquid beauty hard at work. Looks like you got a drop of water on the lower right part of you lens. A longer shutter setting would help pronounce the movment of the water. Great shot. |
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12/09/2002 08:30:27 AM |
| Pretty shot. Focus is a little soft on the rocks, but the color and light are A-1! Good job. Good motion. |
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