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Challenge: In The Style Of: librodo (Advanced Editing VII*)
Collection: Portraits and Headshots
Camera: Nikon D7000
Lens: Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 24-70mm f/2.8G ED
Location: Niskayuna, NY
Date: Mar 14, 2011
Galleries: Portraiture, Studio
Date Uploaded: Mar 15, 2011

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Statistics
Place: 11 out of 95
Avg (all users): 6.6880
Avg (commenters): 7.6667
Avg (participants): 6.1930
Avg (non-participants): 6.8342
Views since voting: 2262
Views during voting: 575
Votes: 250
Comments: 20
Favorites: 3 (view)

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 05/05/2011 10:37:59 PM
Neil, I gave this a 7.

I actually like this. My only suggestion to further improve this is the lighting. It is a bit flat but with photoshop, it can look more 3 dimensional. Maybe some darkness in the edges. Or a vignette will do.

Alsoi don't really like that it is quite obvious that someone is holding up the veil . Maybe have it falling naturally would look it more spontaneous.
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 03/23/2011 05:42:34 PM
congrats Neil, it did pretty darn well, just as I thought it would :)
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 03/22/2011 09:53:23 PM
My 3rd pick for a rib, although I would have fixed that forehead brightness.
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 03/22/2011 08:18:43 PM
Congrats on the top 10, Neil. What the heck do I know...?
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/22/2011 07:49:23 PM
Beautiful image.
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 03/22/2011 02:46:37 AM
Nice image
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 03/20/2011 09:56:48 PM
I really love this shot - the model is beautiful, the sharpness and clarity of her eyes is perfect and the lighting is great. The only one thing I'm not a big fan of is the pattern on the veil... I think it's a bit loud and distracting. Something a little softer, maybe abstract, would add to the composition rather than detract from it.
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 03/20/2011 02:04:11 PM
One of a dozen excellent shots....10 Good luck.
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 03/20/2011 04:01:43 AM
Great pic. My pic for top 5
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 03/19/2011 09:29:49 AM
wow!! this was a great shot!!! you could have played or enhanced the colors from the veil and it'll be really stunning...
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 03/17/2011 04:35:55 PM
nice lighting
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 03/17/2011 12:23:06 PM
my my my gorgeous eyes and a beautiful use of color, in my humble opinion there is only one thing that could be done to improve this photo and that is to crop out the fingers, they distrat from everything else that is goin on
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 03/17/2011 11:56:39 AM
This is a photo that jumped out at me. :) the lighting is very nice and even. simple enough, but it makes a great shot!
9
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 03/17/2011 11:34:07 AM
love the photo
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 03/17/2011 11:16:17 AM
I think this is really nicely done. I would have left out the hand and the dark 'un-scarfed' area on the lower left and upper right. Just a slightly different comp - but nonethess it is gorgeous and I love the partially covered face.
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 03/16/2011 10:16:28 PM
I find the props distracting from the model.
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 03/16/2011 03:11:34 PM
Beautiful image. I like the simple use of colors and a good post-processing. Eyes are really appealing. The highlight on the forehead is a bit bothering to me.

Raj
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 03/16/2011 01:14:49 PM
beautiful to look at .. this is awesome .. :)
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 03/16/2011 03:39:06 AM
The exposed eye has a bit of 'rough' editing to it...that's about my only complaint. You did a great job otherwise.
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 03/15/2011 10:13:28 PM
i think this is the first time so far, that you entered a shot that i liked! lol again, really nice work
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