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03/24/2011 01:52:44 AM |
Judi, I gave this a six.
Plus points: the PP work in the face, the lively colors.
Things to improve:
1. I find the placement of the subject a bit centered. The tilt is awkward, imho. I think it is better without the tilt.
2. The styling can be better: the silver dust i the forehead area, which was sharpened looks like "pixellation". Do away with the necklace. The design of the sticker i the forehead does not look good.
3. The flowers in the background look like "sticking out" from her.
4. The background is too colorful it distracts my attention.
Overall, the picture is pleasing to look at. |
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03/22/2011 08:44:49 PM |
Beautiful image, Judi. I looks very JaimeVainas to me, though :-) |
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03/22/2011 09:37:21 AM |
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03/20/2011 06:48:24 PM |
Is she really blond now? So beautiful. I love all the complimentary colors in the background. |
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03/19/2011 09:29:00 AM |
very very nice shot!! i love the colors!! |
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03/18/2011 09:15:22 AM |
Like this pic a lot, I just wish those flowers didn't stick out behind you like that in all kinds of directions. I would think it might cost you some points because of it. I would have kept those flowers a little farther back so that they would fade some more due to the shallow DOF or just kept them all on one side of you (still farther back). They unfortunately distract the viewers because of where they are. Love your makeup and all the hard work you have put into it. You look beautiful! |
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03/17/2011 04:07:39 PM |
creative, looks like a lot of effort went into this |
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03/17/2011 01:51:35 PM |
This deserves better. Most of the entries dont even come close.Lovely as always! Cant vote |
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03/17/2011 11:43:57 AM |
i think that its the blonde hair that doesn't work for me. also the fact that she isn't looking at the camera, which isn't major, just i think it could make it better. :)
Nice clearity and colors! |
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03/17/2011 11:36:44 AM |
nice photo just doesn't remind me of librodo's style |
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03/17/2011 11:07:33 AM |
Very ethereal. Nice execution and fun colors - the flowers are almost wing like. |
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03/17/2011 03:42:34 AM |
Very beautiful shot. So many elements come together to really make this stand out. I love all the textures and colors, they really frame the model so well. Really nice makeup as well and a very interesting expression. This is one that has so much to explore and seems to look better the more I look, very well done. |
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03/17/2011 12:28:31 AM |
Looks like Kita. I would have to say this is not your strongest work. Something seems disengaged. Also, it seems nitpicky but i think had you combed out the hair it would have added to the shot. |
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03/16/2011 05:56:03 PM |
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03/16/2011 03:05:09 PM |
Brilliant use of colors, great level of details on the face, good use of tilt, great make-up work on the model. This should do well.
I do not know if you had planned for this - I see a burst of colors in the background and the colors on the model are totally opposite to the background. The use of colors on her lips, her clothes, hair color and skin tone are all subtle colors. Great results.
Raj |
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03/16/2011 10:29:56 AM |
Good work Judi, nice colourful background. |
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03/16/2011 04:21:37 AM |
I'm watching her grow up before my eyes. Divine background. |
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03/15/2011 09:16:19 PM |
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