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12/20/2002 02:24:17 AM |
Critique Club
Initial thoughts
Sweet!
Composition/ Content
I think the content is great – my favourite aspect is the way the motion makes her feet look so big – or is she just wearing socks that are too large? :) I like the expression on her face and the motion in her right hand.
Composition wise I don’t like the inclusion of all the netting etc at the top. Playing around with the shot my favourite composition is to crop it at top, left and right – I’ve taken the liberty of having a go and if you’d like to see it just drop me an email.
Background
As above – I’d prefer to focus in on the little girl – with just the bottom lip of the tube showing – and above and to the sides of her only blackness.
Fits The Challenge
Yep!
Your Opinion On The Photo
Like it – it’s fun and engaging.
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12/15/2002 06:24:18 AM |
| OK. But motion study doesn't mean just slow the shutter and get some blur. |
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12/14/2002 06:38:05 AM |
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12/13/2002 10:44:00 AM |
| Great motion. I wish that the lighting had been just a tad brighter, however, if your camera is like mine (no shutter speed settings) you might have had to have low lighting to force the shutter to stay open just a bit? Her hair blends in too well with the slide, that is my reason for wishing there were more light if possible. Otherwise a nice shot of motion. Good luck in the challenge. |
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12/12/2002 10:41:01 AM |
| Great pic of a child having fun! That is priceless to me. Good motion too, also well framed and cropped. |
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12/11/2002 06:35:19 PM |
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12/11/2002 07:15:00 AM |
| Cute shot. Did you have to disguuise yourself as a kid to climb into the park :) Hang that one on your wall. Jacko. |
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12/10/2002 09:54:04 AM |
| I can see the motion in the feet, and I like the tunnel being very dark. |
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12/09/2002 09:24:01 PM |
| Nice timing. I've used these tubular slides as props myself (see my entry for "Upside Down" if you're curious). |
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