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01/09/2011 08:25:49 AM |
Critique Club Comment:
This is pretty good - great idea and just a few tweaks would make it great. The forearm doesn't really add to the image; the hand and the toy is really what this image is about. By either moving in closer, or cropping the top fourth of the image, you would get a better, more balanced composition.
A little fill flash would have brightened the colors and let you close down the aperture a bit more, or just aided you in stopping the action. |
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01/04/2011 08:33:53 AM |
| This is nice, my daughter loves that kind of toys too, she has a similar one and is one of her faves ;) |
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12/30/2010 01:21:55 PM |
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12/29/2010 09:27:44 AM |
| i like the subdued light and the fact we dont see the face |
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12/29/2010 08:30:13 AM |
| I'm not sure what part of this is in focus. I like the natural light and appreciate that you didn't over-saturate the colors, thought they are faded to the point of looking almost vintage. Nice comp! |
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12/27/2010 11:57:54 AM |
| The toy and hand should be in focus for the shot to have impact, the lighting is suffering also. |
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