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08/01/2004 12:30:27 AM |
Hello Lee from the Critique Club
This is a very nice image, but I think your score suffered from the fact that this type of image has been used before. Not original in itself although you have used sheet music instead of a book but first glance voters would not notice that ( In my opinion)
Lighting at the top of the page seems too bright and this may be helped by lowering your mid tonal values.
Apart from the top third which is soft but that could be intentional
It has very good focus and colour
The image fits the challenge
Almost got the score you wanted and maybe like I said before if this had been the first time with this type of image it would have done better
So enjoy your photography
Good luck in future Challenges
If you have any questions please feel free to P M me
Regards
Sally
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07/25/2004 06:40:40 PM |
| A bit overused on this site, but well done |
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07/25/2004 04:37:58 PM |
| Very cool idea and photo! best score I have given yet. |
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07/25/2004 05:50:26 AM |
| Is this inspired by one of Ben (Konador) 's images? Lovely idea. Exposure/ lighting at top of page isn't ideal. |
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07/24/2004 08:58:21 PM |
Ben? Not again I'm presuming...
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07/24/2004 12:24:05 AM |
| I'm sure you've heard this: If this isn't Konadors shot, it is very close to it! Nicely setup, doen't like how pages look pink |
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07/23/2004 06:47:26 PM |
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07/23/2004 04:03:39 AM |
| I think this idea has been done too many times already, not very orginal as others have probably have said. Highlights are a bit blown at the top. |
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07/22/2004 09:01:19 PM |
| I've tried to disregard that i have seen something very similiar in other challenges but it is hard to now see this as a new idea, besides that this shows balance well without the need of the title but the title also adds another dimension. well done. |
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07/22/2004 02:08:25 PM |
| Cool idea, excellent title. A little more DOF and the top of the filter would be in focus. |
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07/21/2004 11:56:37 PM |
| WOW, this is sure original... |
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07/21/2004 07:21:04 PM |
This is a good, well executed image. Comp, balance, DOF and color are great. The white along the top is a bit blown out.
The first time something like this was done, it got very good marks for innovation and degree of difficulty. But you don't have to be a rocket scientist to build the second atom bomb.
Still, it's a good image and I gave it a good score. |
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07/21/2004 06:24:45 PM |
| This is a konador type shot? no? |
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07/21/2004 05:41:19 PM |
| hmmmm.. is this from the same person that made the photograph just like this recently in a challenge? I think it's too soon too see this one again.... same person or not. |
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07/21/2004 11:41:10 AM |
| This image is not a flaw in the DPC code is it? I think I have seen it done a few times before on DPC. I am not going to vote this image down because I have seen similar images before. What you have achieved is beautiful except for the top part of the image and colours on the sheets. Learning is about making an attempt. Best of luck. |
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07/20/2004 08:49:56 PM |
| It's great! But I am sure others will say its become cliche or done too much. Exposure is right on, composition is right on - good luck on overcoming the bias. |
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07/20/2004 09:38:48 AM |
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07/19/2004 04:35:38 PM |
| This has been done before by Konador (ribbon here at DPC if I remember right). Only difference I see is the book is different. The shot is very well executed, but total lack of originality ends in lower score. |
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07/19/2004 09:22:51 AM |
| Very well done! Good theme. |
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07/19/2004 08:53:13 AM |
| Getting very popular this shot :) |
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07/18/2004 11:39:17 PM |
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07/18/2004 10:46:59 PM |
| C'mon! This is becoming impossible to vote on without bias. This is a good shot that I've seen several times in different variations. How about some originality? |
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07/18/2004 09:48:32 PM |
| have i seen this before???????????? |
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07/18/2004 09:23:35 PM |
| man this is as unoriginal as it gets! |
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07/18/2004 09:19:25 PM |
| OverDone !, can't see that anymore, but really beautifull picture... i hesitate... 1-2-1-2.. ok a7 |
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07/18/2004 08:48:13 PM |
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