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08/04/2010 04:33:32 PM |
Greetings! From the critique club! XD
Beautiful capture Sammy...
First thing I notice is the bee on the flower, so kudos to you for getting the shallow DOF perfect. The processing and colors are fantastic, however there's three things that could have been done differently to achieve a better photo:
1. I think many will agree with me on that this would've scored better had you cropped in closer on the bee. There are many available crops at yours disposal, and the closer the better.
2. Also, processing has created some halos around the bee and the leaves, some noise reduction, GB and detail enhancement can get rid of that.
3. I also would have liked to see the bee's wings sharper. Using a faster shutter speed of around 1/800 sec would have helped that, you could also bump the ISO up to 200 if you needed some more light.
Hope that was helpful to you!
- Jackson |
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07/28/2010 05:20:06 PM |
| Lovely rich color; like the motion blur on the bee's wings. |
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07/28/2010 10:46:31 AM |
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