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Camera: Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Lens: Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM
Date: Jun 29, 2010
Aperture: 3.2
ISO: 320
Shutter: 1/250
Date Uploaded: Jul 7, 2010

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 07/08/2010 06:55:57 AM
Nice triangular compo. I'm quite happy with the fact that it's off-center. Doesn't detract IMHO.

What I don't like:
#1 - You seem to be using some moderately heavy handed editing on these. Look at the arms, there's bright red speckling all over the place. That suggests a really high level of saturation in at least one or two channels.

Also, I'm seeing very odd artifacts in the stones. Could be "less than desirable" bokeh, but I'm not that familiar with the 24-70 f/2.8.

As far as exposure, those rails are torqued a little bit too strong. They are by far the brightest things in the entire picture, and as such, they attract all the eye's attention.

Tough to balance since the girl is backlit...

Also, another factor in this is the very dark scenery. I actually don't dislike that tremendously, it's just that it seems a bit strong when compared with the rest of the scene.

And as with the others, the girl is underexposed. Especially in the face and eyes.
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