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07/16/2004 02:58:07 PM |
Hi Harvey,
Good picture. My only critique is that it is hard to see the cherry that Julianna is about to eat. Maybe if she was turned a bit twords the camera to give the picture depth or it she was looking at the camera. Heh, just my amaturish 2 cents worth. ;)
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07/11/2004 06:56:43 PM |
| nice - sensual + allegorical plus lots more. nice composition. but can she tie the cherry stem without her hands? then were talking challenge winner! |
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07/11/2004 05:48:21 PM |
| Clear photo, well composed. |
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07/10/2004 08:10:15 PM |
| Great natural color. I really like the flesh tones here. 9 |
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07/06/2004 02:13:26 PM |
| If this were just a tad brighter, I'd rate it higher. I do like the composition of this picture, though. |
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07/06/2004 09:24:22 AM |
| Nice idea. What doesn't work is that the grape is central to the shot, but doesn't stand out due to no contrast with it and the background. |
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07/06/2004 06:25:12 AM |
| Interesting pose/composition. Good lighting. Too far away from the object she is putting in her mouth for that part to be really effective. |
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07/06/2004 05:50:03 AM |
| I think more light on the purple grape would have made it more... well... purple. As it is the 'purple' in your image looks almost black. |
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07/05/2004 05:53:57 PM |
A wonderful approach, but I would have turned the head a bit more to give the grape more visibility. Yet, it remains very seductive.
Message edited by author 2004-07-12 00:24:50. |
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07/05/2004 11:37:19 AM |
| It is a nice potrait but i would liek to se even morepurplein it. It is not so obvoius as it can be. |
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07/05/2004 05:30:36 AM |
| Nice. Subtle. Background seems a little dark but provides nice contrast to the fair-skinned model. Perhaps overexposing 1 or 2 more stops would've brightened up the image nicely. I autoleveled your image and saw much greater contrast and potential to become brighter in post processing. I would've scored this much higher if the lighting was better. Also would've liked to see the tip of her elbow but that's subjective. |
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07/05/2004 01:36:37 AM |
| The only problem with this shot is that it's hard to tell what she's eating - it really blends into the background. But the rest of the shot is lit well and goes great for this challenge. Nice job! |
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