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05/30/2010 07:01:04 PM |
| Great story. No title needed. |
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05/30/2010 12:45:54 AM |
| I seriously do not understand the context you were trying to portray here. There is not even a title to help the viewer along in terms of finding your direction. What is the focus? Why is he holding a book? Why is he doing this when she's sweeping? There's nowhere for the viewer to look and comprehend the scene, no cultural reference points. |
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05/27/2010 08:01:22 AM |
The charisma and charm of her body language with the broom suddenly swept over him, and he was lost in a fit of passion.
"Will you marry me?" he implored. "I need you so badly, and I realized it so suddenly, I didn't even have time to kneel. Or put my book down. Will you be mine?"
"I don't know," she said. "Let me finish sweeping first." |
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05/25/2010 04:42:30 AM |
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