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07/20/2004 12:22:14 PM |
| In this photo, the background takes away from the photo a lot! The highlight from the light source in the upper left also slightly takes away from the photo! Great subject matter though, good thinking! |
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07/13/2004 07:25:07 PM |
| Closer, cropped photo might be better. |
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07/13/2004 06:19:24 PM |
| I might understand this image if it was exposed correctly,,. |
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07/13/2004 04:16:26 PM |
| What's your subject here? Everything in the photo seems to be fighting for attention. Try it in B&W with a plain back ground and eliminate the glare on the book. |
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07/11/2004 05:31:32 PM |
| The idea here is interesting, you seem to have over edited a bit, though. The hand is nice and sharp, very good detail, and the pose is a good leader into the center of the frame. The phonebook, unfortunately, is terribly washed out, I wouldn't know what it was without your title. The background is very odd, did you overuse the sharpening tools? There seem to be fuzzy trees with sharp edges, and some of the effect even occurs on the hand. Could also be due to overusing levels. I think you propably have a very strong original, try re-editing to show us that strength. |
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07/10/2004 06:05:44 AM |
| Walking through a jungle! I love it! |
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07/09/2004 07:28:30 AM |
| Nice shot but the background is a bit distracting. |
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07/08/2004 04:56:34 PM |
| the plant (?) in the background is very distracting, and doesn't add to the message -- had the background been out-of-place (for example in front of a auto dealer) and conveying the message of WHERE the yellow pages will walk you to, it would support the message. |
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07/08/2004 01:42:45 PM |
| Hmm. Great shot of a hand but not sure what the Yellow Pages are. A little distracting. |
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07/07/2004 11:56:15 PM |
| the glare makes the yellow washed out. Could have shot a little higher angle |
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07/07/2004 08:02:31 AM |
| Oh very original.............NOT! |
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07/07/2004 03:37:54 AM |
| Whit that title, this si a great add. Let your fingers do the walking - great slogan! |
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07/07/2004 02:44:19 AM |
| Nioce shot. WOuld love to see bit more detail and 'YELLOW' in the book. |
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07/06/2004 09:25:21 PM |
| The image is overexposed, with the with a red tint. The product iteself is not visible, and the background is distracting. |
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07/06/2004 09:24:24 PM |
| It'd be much more challenge-worthy if the focus of the photo was the book. This has an artistic feel, whereas an advertising image would probably not. |
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