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04/10/2010 11:44:03 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Conceptual: Awesome. Think it fits this challenge beautifully. Makes me want to walk though and enjoy the ocean on the other side.
"exit to another world" - what makes this seem other worldly?
Composition and Lighting: The lighting here seems a bit dull. Though the lighting on the clouds and surf in the background is interesting, the overcast tones in the foreground don't give it any emphasis. Maybe at sunrise or sunset with this same frame, you could have captured a totally different scene.
Technical: The first thing that strikes my technical eye is the grainy texture. I think
Overall: Lovely invite into the surf and sun.
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04/03/2010 04:49:27 PM |
A very good one: idea + execution. |
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03/31/2010 01:53:00 PM |
I wish I had one of these. Cool blues... |
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03/31/2010 02:29:02 AM |
hehe to Melmac mabye ?? i like,,,,,,,,, |
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03/31/2010 01:15:48 AM |
Nice idea, but a little dark and the composition lacks 'pop' - there is great framing but no real subject. |
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