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04/12/2010 07:17:24 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
I think that the vignetting is the biggest thing hurting you here. Especially on the left it is unnaturally dark. Also I'd suggest a bigger aperture (smaller number). It would do great to have the background more out of focus with just the flowers sharp. With your lens I'd try f/4.
I like the gradient from white to purple on the flower petals, the exposure is good there. Just wish the flowers had been more of a focal point.
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04/07/2010 05:52:16 PM |
| seems very cold clear light, for the title, with some nice petal texture but to be homes the darkness on the L seems out of sync with the rest of the comp (JMO) |
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04/06/2010 04:40:15 PM |
| This is beautiful but the vignette feels very unnatural. |
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04/04/2010 07:34:18 AM |
| first signs of spring, don't you love them? |
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04/01/2010 05:46:52 AM |
| Lighting seems a bit harsh on this. Nice color, and it's GREAT to be out from under all that snow, eh? :-) |
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