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07/12/2004 04:28:46 AM |
Hello Kreg from the Critique Club,
Composition
The statue is clearly your primary subject and I like the way the branches on the left and the trees on the right provide a frame. The camera position means the wall is sloping away form the viewer and this provides some interesting diagonal lines. Maybe the window behind the statue is a bit distracting but I'm not sure what you could have done about that. Maybe I would have cropped a little less on the bottom, to retain the whole of the plinth or at least the first step.
Focus
The statue itself is in focus - there is deep depth of field which is fine, although a wider aperture with consequently less depth of field might have softened the background to some advantage.
Exposure
Capturing white subjects in a generally dark background is always difficult. You have overexposed some of the statue, losing some highlight detail, which is a pity but had you reduced the light by smaller aperture or shorter exposure you would have lost details in the shadows. Maybe the statue was more important?
Challenge
This was a good subject for the challenge for those with the appropriate religious understanding (and convictions).
Overall
The religious theme will spark an interest from some of your audience - others may react against it. It is a very reasonable capture of the statue. Wander around some more and take your camera with you!
Hugh
Any comments or reactions, feel free to contact me. |
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07/06/2004 08:45:29 AM |
excellent title ... extraordinary man |
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07/03/2004 08:14:44 PM |
Nice shot but the title seems trite - still, it's a great composition. - 7 |
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07/03/2004 12:30:56 AM |
stunning photo, good composition |
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07/02/2004 09:33:32 PM |
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07/02/2004 02:57:24 AM |
Window in th ebackground distracts a bit. Maybe a little less DOF? |
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07/01/2004 10:09:30 PM |
good concept. The lighting could be better as the highlights seem a little blown. A different angle might have produced a more unteresting composition and provided a more uniform background. |
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07/01/2004 07:56:42 PM |
Agree with you on that one. |
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07/01/2004 07:58:49 AM |
This is cheating! If I give this photo a low score then I'm in Big Trouble with the Lord! just kidding, very nice shot. 10 |
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06/30/2004 11:21:25 AM |
Well if it was the real thing then..... |
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06/30/2004 03:56:10 AM |
its only extroardinary if your religious. in my opinion this does not fit the challenge. I also think it would have looked better with a tighter crop on the sides and a little on the top. |
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06/29/2004 08:47:11 PM |
Clever concept and well executed photo! |
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