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07/04/2004 05:06:20 PM |
Lighting: is too dark on the left and hot on the left, both loosing detail; but the catchlights really add the the expression.
Pose: The pose is great
Background: cluttered. |
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07/04/2004 01:06:30 PM |
Lovely expresion you have captured.
One of my favorite shots
well done
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Last look at all the shots and this is getting a bump from a 9 to a 10
good luck |
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07/03/2004 10:12:33 AM |
I think I'd make a mask for the far background and blur the heck out of it (or fill with a gradient) so this would look more like a studio shot than a candid portrait. Great pose/expression. |
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07/03/2004 12:21:01 AM |
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07/02/2004 08:20:12 AM |
I can see this in an ad. Well done. Love her expression! :o) |
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07/01/2004 01:22:34 PM |
I like how you caught the sparkle in the eyes. |
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07/01/2004 10:03:22 AM |
Contagious and cute smile and unorthodox pose make this a compelling photo for me. Could use a bit more detail in the shadows and a little more blur of the background too. |
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07/01/2004 05:10:22 AM |
fun shot, good catchlights too and a great smile |
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07/01/2004 04:21:03 AM |
IMHO, this would be an INCREDIBLE portrait had there been a backdrop behind her. as it is its still a great shot of an obviously very happy, pretty little girl. |
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06/30/2004 02:02:42 PM |
What a smile. This looks like an advertisement. |
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06/30/2004 11:30:45 AM |
If the idea of taking a portrait is to capture a little of the model's personality, you hammered this. Colors, expression, context are all excellent. A slightly sharper focus would have gotten a 9 or 10. As is, 8 and a recomendation to save this picture for a long time to enjoy. |
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06/30/2004 10:54:25 AM |
the light from her left is a little harsh but the eyes and the smile are great |
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06/30/2004 10:50:08 AM |
This is a great shot, and my favourite of the challenge. 10. |
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06/30/2004 08:18:51 AM |
Lovely young lady in a very cute pose! Great use of catch light to get the twinkle in her eye. Nice use of creative lighting to giver her face depth. Two things that would take this from a good shot to a great shot, there's a little bit of clutter in the background. A simple cloth hung behind or a slightly different angle takes care of that. Also, the left side of the shot is a tad too dark at the top. I would try a simple reflector (spelled white poster board) to bounce back just a touch of light onto the headphones!
TC |
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06/30/2004 12:25:09 AM |
Just toooo cute! Love it. |
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06/29/2004 07:00:56 PM |
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06/29/2004 05:53:40 PM |
Expressive eys - full of character.Nice lighting and exposure - composition is OK but I'm not thrilled with the arm in the forground. |
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06/29/2004 04:25:33 AM |
Very natural, nicely composed |
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06/29/2004 03:54:59 AM |
Outstanding setting, lighting and DOF and the expression looks so natural. Maybe the lines in the background are a bit awkward but this should be top three. |
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06/29/2004 01:28:35 AM |
Nice but the dark/black areas around and on the earphone seems to have little detail. |
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06/28/2004 10:50:58 PM |
Background issue here - looks like someone's living-room. Good light, good pose and capture - apart from that background couldn't criticise at all. 6 |
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06/28/2004 08:06:55 PM |
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06/28/2004 06:08:44 PM |
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06/28/2004 04:13:29 PM |
made me smile :) I love the catchlight in the eyes |
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06/28/2004 01:56:10 PM |
Very good capture! One of my top pics |
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06/28/2004 12:38:16 PM |
nice, different, powerfull. great eyes. |
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06/28/2004 11:24:20 AM |
This looks more like a spontaneous moment and less like a "studio" shot, but her smile is great the catchlights help a lot. Well done. |
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06/28/2004 10:42:18 AM |
Great child portrait, you've really captured a "moment" here. Great work. |
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06/28/2004 08:37:13 AM |
This is so cute ... you should frame this one on your wall :) |
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06/27/2004 08:56:37 PM |
Cute expression, good color. Would only comment that it could be a bit more sharp. Over all I like it. Good work, cute girl. |
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06/27/2004 08:26:02 PM |
Really nice capture. I know this might have been difficult if this was a lucky candid, but the background doesn't feel like a studio. Still, good shot. |
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06/27/2004 08:21:12 PM |
I wouldn't call this a "studio", unless it's a music studio. |
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