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07/12/2004 05:13:46 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
The message
A beautiful setting, and the image has a nice soft and peaceful mood. And it does make the girl seem extraordinary!
Creative choices
The photo seems setup, not that there is anything particularly wrong with that, but having the beginnings of a painting on the paper and some paint on the palette would have made it more realistic and effective. I also think this would have worked better in landscape mode, with lots of space in front of the model. (Or maybe I just want to see what she's thinking of painting!) The setting works well, and the colors are great. The soft focus is perfect.
Technical aspects
The overall exposure is fine, but the girl and her easel are too dark. A fill-in flash might have remedied this, or perhaps a Levels adjustment could have helped a bit. |
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07/06/2004 09:07:42 PM |
| great job, brian! i'm really looking forward to seeing more of your pics. :-) |
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07/06/2004 08:52:55 PM |
Thank you all So much! I didnt do as well on this first one...but ya will see more of me! Sweet comments and constructive critisism are learning tools and I appreciate em both!
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07/06/2004 07:04:23 PM |
| I very much like the idea and I think it is an extraordinary shot. |
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07/06/2004 10:17:33 AM |
Beautiful!
Love the picture, colour & composition |
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07/06/2004 05:09:45 AM |
| Best of the bunch in my opinion |
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07/03/2004 08:26:26 PM |
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07/03/2004 10:38:15 AM |
| whereis the girl, I can not see her with the sun, You could use flash in this situation... a 4 |
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07/03/2004 07:47:19 AM |
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07/01/2004 02:23:35 PM |
| I like the softness of the photo. Only critique would be the removal of the orange sticker on the easel. beautiful 9 |
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07/01/2004 05:16:34 AM |
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06/30/2004 11:29:31 PM |
| Not really sharp enough for me, maybe increase the contrast a bit! Nice idea though. |
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06/30/2004 10:26:41 PM |
| I like this a lot... interesting how the girl has a kind of ghostly quality which gives this image an extraordinary dreamlike quality. |
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06/30/2004 10:22:11 PM |
| I love the colors. The fisher price easel seems a bit out of place though (although the colors do match!) |
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06/30/2004 11:54:11 AM |
| Wow nice shot. Although glare from the sun is a bit too much. |
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06/30/2004 06:11:22 AM |
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06/29/2004 08:20:12 PM |
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