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07/04/2004 05:53:16 PM |
| This is a classic pose and her expression is almost perfect. Her chin is tilted just a bit high, could bring it down just a bi so we aren't looking up her nose so much ;)t. Also the lighting seems rather flat, leaving her skin with a dull look. And it looks like there is purple on her hair or neck on the left? Not sure where that came from. A 5 |
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07/04/2004 04:44:37 PM |
Lighting: Well done, with perfectly expressive catchlights.
Pose: The pose is well done, but I think tilting her head toward the camera and then moving the camera up to just above eye level would have been more expressive without the foreshortening.
Background: The solid black is well done, but a lighter color would have conveyed 'pleasant' more clearly. |
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07/04/2004 11:25:38 AM |
Beatiful lady in a simple elegant pose, nicely light. Not much you can do to improve on this! The only thing I find distracting is the purplish object between her hair and rist in the center of the shot. Is it the color of her shirt? A shirt underneath?
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07/04/2004 08:18:26 AM |
| Good lighting, detail, use of "blocks" of color/shapes. |
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07/03/2004 05:55:40 AM |
| Natural looking pose and expression on your model and I like your angle of view. Colors and skin tones good too. Black background really make your model stand out. Well done. |
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07/02/2004 08:20:52 AM |
| Very nicely done. I would have removed some of the jewelry, except for the watch and ring. Wonderful pose and lighting is effective. :o) |
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07/02/2004 02:29:12 AM |
| I thought this was really well done. I might have tried to light her face just a fraction more. |
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07/01/2004 03:48:22 PM |
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06/30/2004 03:07:14 PM |
| I think in a portrait the eyes should be a center of focus. Her eyes are nice and bright with good catch light but they are they same brightness as her finger tips, Well, it is a nice french manicure but unless she was the manicurist or particularly values her hands, I think the fingernails command too much importance. The best light falls on her hand also and the jewelry is ver interesting, That leaves her face with a secondary importance. What about cropping just below her knuckles, that looks more balanced to me and makes her lovely face stand out. I do like the way you have left more space on the left, leaving room for her gaze to be part of the picture. Maybe the white balance is too pink? |
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06/30/2004 01:56:01 PM |
| A winner in my book. Very well captured. |
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06/30/2004 08:45:58 AM |
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06/30/2004 05:29:07 AM |
| She's a very pretty woman. Looks over sharpened and her jewelry is reflecting a lot of light. Personally, I think I'd prefer her to be looking at the camera ... but I know this is a matter of opinion. |
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06/29/2004 06:11:34 PM |
| Beautiful model taken with great lighting. Pose seems a bit static for some reason. Great choice of background for the model and her clothing. |
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06/29/2004 01:49:53 PM |
| Glare from her fingernails is a little distracting. |
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06/29/2004 07:23:10 AM |
likes: nice pose good soft expression
dislikes: camera angle - from this angle my eye always goes to the nose
lighting seems to be just a bit harsh, if you are using strobes back them up about a foot that should help |
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06/29/2004 02:30:53 AM |
| Lighting, focus, background all great. |
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06/28/2004 06:06:13 PM |
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06/28/2004 05:48:21 PM |
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06/28/2004 02:04:51 PM |
| Good capture, maybe a bit over-composed (6) |
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06/28/2004 01:06:06 PM |
| the light is somewhat glaring |
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06/28/2004 12:39:32 PM |
nice expression on your model.
She looks slightly uncomfortable though with her hand at her face
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06/28/2004 10:56:27 AM |
| Nice shot. Good lighting. |
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06/28/2004 06:34:52 AM |
| Attractive lady. I think for her I would of liked a softer lighting and for sure a solid colored shirt. Over all a good shot and I hope you do well in the challenge. Good luck. |
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06/28/2004 04:30:55 AM |
| i don't like the green from here sleeves, it doesn't go with the atmosphere of the picture. |
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06/28/2004 04:05:24 AM |
| Lovely photo. Lighting is great, and the black background makes the lovely model stand out beautifully. |
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06/27/2004 08:27:14 PM |
| The lighting and composition is great in this photo. My only complaint is that the POV is too low. |
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