GREETINGS FROM THE CRITIQUE CLUB
Oh, sometimes I sigh a little at our voters. Yes, there are some technical issues, but still... It is a cute idea and your colors are excellent. It is not easy to get those whites white, and still have good definition, and you did it. The tissue box is well exposed and the subject does meet the Challenge. (Although it possibly would have been better to have the 'count' visible on the box, rather than depending on the title.)
When I look on my monitor(s) I do notice that your box is resting on a not-quite-as-black surface as the backdrop. Monitors are tricky, and with blacks, it's important to double check that everything is the color you want it to be. While I think you probably thought it was all going to be the same tone of black, it might also be fun to experiment with a different color to the image doesn't appear to be floating in space. Just a thought, of course, because it's your decision all the way.
Good luck in your future entries. I do look forward to seeing them and I hope this small critique is helpful to you.
Alice |
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