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02/28/2010 08:23:41 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
First Impressions:
Was that this really doesn’t seem to meet the challenge.
Technical (Comp, lighting, color, focus):
The composition on this seems a bit cluttered, especially with all of the background elements. I would suggest trying to isolate your main subject a bit more to draw the eyes to it.
The lighting is a bit harsh, likely due to time of day and the high iso. I would suggest for this shot to drop the f-stop down around 5.6 or so to get some background blur and definitely lower your iso to 100, especially in bright daylight.
The focus is fine but as already mentioned I would drop the f-stop to get the background out of focus.
Challenge:
This shot really didn’t fit the challenge and that is likely why you received numerous 4 and lower votes.
Artistic/Emotion:
N/A
Summary:
If you are new to photography I would suggest reading up on the relation of aperture, shutter speed and iso. Also keep entering challenges, as that is how you will continue to grow. I hope to see more entries from you. If you look at some of the recent ribbon winners you will see that their first entries finished similar to yours.
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02/16/2010 06:30:28 PM |
| Well that's one perspective! |
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02/16/2010 07:56:06 AM |
| Rather meaningless image with no perspective. 4 |
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02/13/2010 01:52:41 PM |
| I think a different angle with this would work better, maybe if you could of isolated the skeleton a bit more. |
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02/13/2010 01:02:27 PM |
| interesting, i dont see that the perspective adds anything, as it seems to be shot straight on |
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02/12/2010 03:24:37 PM |
| Not really seeing "perspective" here. Top of the photo is really blown out probably due to lighting and the time of day when you took the shot. I do like the PP coloring though. |
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02/12/2010 08:47:25 AM |
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02/12/2010 06:16:37 AM |
| seems the theme doesn't fit |
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02/12/2010 05:12:16 AM |
| A pretty fun image yet the perspective is somewhat plain as it is shot from straight ahead. |
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