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Challenge: Hot II (Basic Editing)
Collection: 2010
Camera: Canon EOS-50D
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Location: Grapevine, Texas
Date: Jan 31, 2010
Aperture: F4.0
ISO: 1600
Shutter: 1/64
Galleries: Vintage, History
Date Uploaded: Feb 2, 2010

Yes, there are still a few real, functioning blacksmith shops around. This one is located near the railroad yards in Grapevine, Texas.

Thomas is an apprentice blacksmith, working part time in this shop, learning the art. In this shot, he is pounding on an old railroad spike. He explained to me that he was making a replacement door handle for his car out of it. Bill, the full time blacksmith, was busy making some custom door handles for a new restaurant. You can tell these guys love what they are doing here.

I like how this compares to the very similar shot from the same session that I used in "pieces of the human form". That one focuses on the blacksmith's hands, while this one draws the eye to the shower of hot sparks.

I think this may get blasted for flaws, but it may also do well, for what I did capture. I have no real feeling about what to expect from this entry.

Anticipated critiques/comments:
-I expect some will not like the motion blur and may perceive it as unfocused. (I had a number of other shots that were crisp and clear, but they also looked like he was casually resting the hammer on top of the spike)
-Too busy
-The mortar in the background is a distracting element. (If this was advanced editing, I would have darkened it a bit.)
-Should have cropped closer. (Tried it that way, didn't like it.)

Post-challenge notes:
As expected, this garnered more low votes than my very similar, but blur-free entry in "Pieces of the human form"

Despite not doing as well as it's non-identical twin, this still ended up in my happy zone. The commenters average was very high, considerably higher than it's higher averaging twin. A successful entry.

Statistics
Place: 26 out of 83
Avg (all users): 5.5880
Avg (commenters): 7.8000
Avg (participants): 5.8333
Avg (non-participants): 5.5498
Views since voting: 1118
Views during voting: 402
Votes: 267
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0


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AuthorThread
02/10/2010 12:27:11 PM
Good job Steve! Top 1/3. Very impressive. I think the "busy" works for this environment, usually is a busy area.
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02/10/2010 01:36:33 AM
I gave this a 9. I thought this was a great image for the challenge; red hot iron, sparks, and motion blur of the blacksmith. It has it all. Much underrated.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/09/2010 05:38:24 PM
Apparently, "Getting Hammered" is sometimes a GOOD Thing! ;)
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02/09/2010 07:22:54 AM
Very nice image,like the motion blur giving sensation of hot & motion.
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02/09/2010 04:21:43 AM
Love the sparks and the implied motion.
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02/04/2010 06:38:39 AM
i like this pic
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02/03/2010 04:10:17 PM
I know the motion puts it out of focus but it shows movement, the white hot steel and the sparks are great
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