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02/04/2010 12:06:39 PM |
GREETINGS FROM THE CRITIQUE CLUB
Well,  kellmak10 you may be new to photography but you have a good eye and an excellent grasp of photographic storytelling.
So, you don't have much of a downtown. So you took what you had and told a story about your town and processed it in excellently in black & white. You've talked about a busy highway, truck traffic, train crossings and a community church, all without being cluttered or messy.
Anyhow, I'm supposed to critique your image (that's what this DPC club is for) so here goes: IMO - Don't change a thing.
Eventually the high scores will come - or not. Look up  Posthumous's work for another very exciting angle at this photography obsession of ours.
Okay, good work, sorry it didn't score well. Keep 'em coming.
I hope this little critique was helpful to you.
Alice |
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02/03/2010 08:25:29 AM |
| thank you all so much for the wonderful comments ... i'm just starting out with photography, so the comments are really important and helpful. wish this one got a better score too, but it means way more that two people marked it as favs!! thanks :) |
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02/03/2010 05:18:55 AM |
| Interesting take on the subject. I really like using the gas pumps as a frame for the shot. Nice b&w conversion -- really adds to the feel of the shot. |
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02/03/2010 03:59:30 AM |
| Not a great score but a great picture. This was one of my three tens that I gave out, the other two are on the front page and imo, this should be up there too! |
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01/30/2010 02:17:27 PM |
| I like the feel of this image. I shows that you put a lot of thought into your composition when finding a shot. |
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01/29/2010 06:33:42 PM |
| I paged through the photos the other day and this was on a the few that really grabbed me. So many things to grab your attention and really take you to rural town USA. Excellently framed, nicely converted to b&w and the perfect amount of motion captured all together make this one of the finest shots in the challenge. Good luck and well done! |
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01/29/2010 05:50:22 AM |
| Great p.o.v. Love the extreme b&w.....9. |
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01/28/2010 07:41:45 AM |
| I thing actually getting on the street and not between the pumps would have helped here. |
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01/27/2010 02:51:07 PM |
| Nice and clear with truck wizzing by wish I was there looks like a great street. |
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01/27/2010 10:51:42 AM |
| just my personal opinion but I think this would have been a better shot if the truck had not been blurred |
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01/27/2010 09:56:25 AM |
| Great B&W processing, neat effect with the motion blur |
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