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06/27/2004 06:33:44 AM |
THis is very very well thought out, composed adn finished. I like the contrast of the whites in the desat and the black and white. The only distraction is that the subject is a bit busy and mundane, my eyes are drawn to 3 places- the two garbage cans and the umbrella that is black and white. |
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06/24/2004 10:35:51 PM |
Excellent Entry! This is fun for the eye to browse around all the action. Clean, clear detail and the umbrellas bring flavor to the scene. My only thought on how I might improve on this would be to take a look at how bright the shirt is on the guy at the bottom right. I might try to tone his shirt down to blend with the rest of the people. I like this. 9 |
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06/24/2004 07:56:28 PM |
Very nice. Some blown highlights but still very good. |
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06/24/2004 07:02:09 PM |
Really nice shot - one of the best in this challenge. It's amazing how much the people fade into the background when desaturated like that. |
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06/24/2004 04:29:04 PM |
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06/24/2004 07:39:58 AM |
great perspective and choice of what to desat...This picture tells a story, which in my opinion is a goal of photography. I love the "busy-ness" of the shot, the candidness (are any of those real words?), and the overall feel. I'm stopping short of giving you a 10 because I think it could have been a bit lighter. I'm sure the desaturation/grayscale conversion caused this, but there are several tricks to lightening without breaking DPC rules. Here's your 9 (wish I could give a 9.5) :) |
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06/23/2004 06:06:52 PM |
Unusual perspective that works well. Not sure, but it may be stronger with jsut one of the umbrellas in color. |
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06/20/2004 10:30:31 PM |
You would have been better off with just one umbrella. |
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