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01/23/2010 01:06:23 AM |
| You know I've come back to this again - because it has really grown on me - very nice indeed. |
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01/07/2010 01:46:34 AM |
| I really like 2/3s of your shot here. Great angle and pose and love the freckles and wide open eyes. You have not done your model any favours with your post production of the hair as right now it looks very flat and lifeless. I think it just needs an over all boost. |
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01/06/2010 04:00:10 PM |
| Eyes, freckles, expression are wonderful. I like the processing. You might crop the top just a bit. |
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01/06/2010 10:54:54 AM |
I think this is really striking. Her skin is so real with her freckles showing. Her eyes are stopping, and I'm a big fan of just partial desaturation. I like it alot.
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01/06/2010 10:38:34 AM |
| Hmm has an almost 50's feel to it :-) |
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01/06/2010 07:18:32 AM |
i'd combine what  photokariangel and Jutilda said to slide more of attention to the bottom 2/3 of the photo. super angle! |
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01/06/2010 04:42:08 AM |
| Love her face. What if you cropped off a bunch of the top and just made it landscape and we concentrated only on her face, not her hair. Just a though. |
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01/06/2010 02:44:29 AM |
| Great expression and POV but I do think the processing is perhaps a little heavy-handed; I like what you were going for but the transitions between saturated and desaturated are a bit too visible. |
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01/05/2010 08:53:22 PM |
man....something about this is just so totally blowing my mind, you've done something here, going from top to bottom that gives this shot a surreal look that i am loving! in any other shot i would say the whites of the eyes were dodged too much but here, it works perfectly. I think you just got my third fav of this challenge, and a 10!
its like alice in wonderland or something, what a beautiful girl! |
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01/05/2010 07:53:43 PM |
What i like: the color left in her lips. subtle, yet, it adds to the photo for me.
What i think could be improved: something is off about the top of her hair. its a flat tone, when the rest at the bottom is darker and more "real" looking. Maybe a little burning and dodging of that could help bring out more texture. Also, the picture seems out of focus. or unsharpened.
But i love the expression, its timeless and classic. |
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