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01/10/2010 09:41:19 PM |
Fun image. I agree with the comments regarding the arm, its a bit stiff and distract from the rest of the pose. I like her expression and more relaxed lower body. The dress is busy but I think it works well for the image.
cheers,
JKH |
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01/05/2010 03:24:50 PM |
| It seems that the best part of the photo is what is going on with her face - cropping it in so that is the focus more than the stiff arm would be something I would consider trying. |
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01/03/2010 08:07:36 PM |
| i like the model and pose, would like the b/g to be more blurred but hey, thats me |
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01/03/2010 07:52:18 AM |
the only problem i can see with her posing is her hand. its unbearably stiff. Other then that she looks quite good. I agree with  ErikV, either a crop or a rotation crop would help bring the attention fully to her instead of getting lost up in the leaves |
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01/03/2010 06:10:48 AM |
I like it. Kind of edgy and glamorous at the same time :) She looks like she was a good sport and a fun model to work with -- and you did a good job capitalizing on it.
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01/03/2010 05:22:37 AM |
| I like the overall composition and pose. I don't really care for the patterning on the dress as it looks very busy and too reflextive here. |
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01/03/2010 04:26:53 AM |
| Nice sharpness and lighting, great pattern on the dress, expression here seems fine, eyes are great. You might consider desaturating the greens in the background to de-emphasize that area (and perhaps even crop a bit off the top). Minor suggestion: rotate this slightly so that the ledge/wall is perfectly horizontal. |
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01/02/2010 07:39:35 PM |
| very sharp - love the eyes. |
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