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Camera: Canon EOS-7D
Lens: Canon EF 85mm f/1.8 USM
Aperture: f/16
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/200
Galleries: Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Dec 3, 2009

Viewed: 296
Comments: 11
Favorites: 0

from my first session in a studio, as part of my photography course I can hire the studio very cheaply!

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01/13/2010 01:18:27 AM
nice clarity and skin tones!
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01/12/2010 08:25:29 AM
No lighting info!!
01/05/2010 02:59:37 PM
very pretty eyes - i like the pose and the relaxation she shows to us - but I think a bit of cloning or watching the hair fly aways would be something to consider here
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01/05/2010 11:35:40 AM
First impression:
Your model looks very comfortable in front of the lens and shows a natural smile. The tight crop really makes this photo as all my attention is on those beautiful blue eyes.

Suggested improvement:
I wish the bg were pure white instead of having a blueish hue. I think it would help to make the blue in here eyes stand out more.
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01/03/2010 09:55:15 AM
I always like a fill the frame portrait. :)
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01/03/2010 09:39:19 AM
Love the crop, the models smile is lovely.
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01/02/2010 08:30:33 PM
really nice, about the only thing i can say is i might have made sure her hair was neater, it distracts me a little, she has beautiful eyes
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01/02/2010 05:00:37 AM
I might have cloned out the hair on the sleeve of the arm as well, but I am not sure I would have sharpened the shot anymore than it is now. everything appears to be very sharp to me (warning: one of my problems is not sharpening enough - so I could be wrong, but I don't think I am)
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01/02/2010 04:15:19 AM
agree with previous posts...love the crop
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01/01/2010 08:41:33 PM
Nice portrait & I agree with the sharpening suggestions as Erikv said.

Message edited by author 2010-01-02 01:41:48.
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01/01/2010 03:10:05 PM
Nice pose, great smile, good job with the lighting.

Very minor suggestions: a) do a tiny bit of selective sharpening on the eyes so that they match the sharpness of her lips and b) if you have time to spare clone out some of the stray hairs near her arm.
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