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06/26/2004 08:41:50 AM |
Hi Jeremy,
Greetings from the Critique Club...
This is the second entry of yours I've had the pleasure to study and comment on.
I agree with your other commenters -- the sepia tones (and the absence of any elements that would give away the year) has this feeling like an old photo.
I think your photo suffered a bit from the "train" being more of a distracting rather than enhancing element - it's not very photogenic or interesting as presented. While it's a technically good shot it doesn't have a particularly strong composition -- more of a documentary/journalistic feel. (I can see it printed and displayed in the local luncheonette as a representation of a time gone by.)
Please PM me if you have any questions or comments.
Regards, (from nearby Yardley)
Theresa |
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06/19/2004 02:12:55 AM |
| Nice use of sepia. I like the DOF also. All in all a nice shot. |
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06/15/2004 11:24:07 PM |
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06/14/2004 05:11:16 PM |
| Love your tones, focus and pov. Nice shooting. |
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06/14/2004 03:36:35 PM |
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06/13/2004 10:18:39 PM |
| Seems like the building is the subject, and not the flatbed train... but it's a pleasing image. |
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