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klorineforbrains


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Challenge: Triptych III (Basic Editing*)
Camera: Canon EOS-30D
Lens: Canon EF 28-135mm F/3.5-5.6 IS USM
Location: Hamilton, NY
Date: Oct 18, 2009
Aperture: 8.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/160
Galleries: Nature, Diptych / Triptych
Date Uploaded: Oct 19, 2009

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Place: 141 out of 149
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Avg (commenters): 4.1667
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Views since voting: 905
Views during voting: 438
Votes: 254
Comments: 6
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/27/2009 05:13:04 PM
Would have been great if you froze the action a little better.
10/23/2009 02:20:42 PM
The two in-flight pictures take away from the bottom picture. I like the concept (especially with the position of the wings), but the blurriness hinders the overall effect.
10/21/2009 04:27:11 PM
Great attempt at a very difficult task. The bottom pane is very nice - I like the lighting and highlight of the bird's head / neck. Perhaps could lose a good deal of the tree at the far right of the bottom pane. Pan motion is very difficult - especially with a bird, and both of your top frames are OOF. Top left, the bird is almost in silhouette - without the one wing, it would almost look like a shadow. Top right pane, bird is still OOF, and its head is lost in the background.
10/21/2009 10:21:24 AM
Good layout and great colour. Top 2 are a little soft for my taste, though.
10/21/2009 03:37:23 AM
I like the overall idea and the way the panels are arranged. I feel however that the top pictures are not sharp enough (on the bird, that is), and that the bird does not stand out enough in the lower picture.
10/20/2009 08:57:35 PM
the top left hand image is too blurry, and i wish that the bottom image had been a tighter crop. the top right is almost right but still a little blurry!


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