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10/20/2009 04:15:23 AM |
| I like this, but it would have looked better without the people in the background, and a dark backdrop to create drama and atmosphere.... but seeing as it was probably a candid and not a set up shot (I'm presuming), it's a good effort. |
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10/18/2009 05:03:10 AM |
| Nice shot. Cropping the person on the right might've improved the composition, putting even more focus on main subjects. |
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10/16/2009 01:16:52 PM |
| Good one. The title suits the image perfectly. |
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10/16/2009 11:02:15 AM |
| a tighter crop would be nicer without the person on the right |
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10/15/2009 05:14:40 PM |
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10/14/2009 11:46:44 PM |
| Great composition, exposure and use of colors. |
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10/14/2009 07:09:23 AM |
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10/13/2009 08:47:26 PM |
A good idea: both the man and girl on left are engaged in the action.
There ar a couple of things here that could improve a lot the image: (1) The half-girl at the right is a no-no. She does not add anything to the image. Croppin her out would keep the viewer looking on what matters. (2) The white balance seems off to me: for example, his face is too greenish (Ok, it could be the reflection of the table, but still would be better if corrected). |
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10/13/2009 08:42:17 PM |
I like the composition of this, but it's kind of distracting that the brightest object in the frame is also the least in focus.
Did you shoot one where the ball is sharp? |
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