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06/15/2004 05:42:26 PM |
I think I would have liked this better if you'd cropped in closer to the women on the bnech. The bold blue sign distracts from her. |
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06/15/2004 03:37:04 PM |
You've found a beautiful and evocative subject. Your title clearly conveys your interpretation of the scene, perhaps to disadvantage...it might have equally been called "waiting for the other to leave" Tough subject to capture! Perhaps a tighter crop from the left? |
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06/12/2004 05:27:21 AM |
Cropping off the "under new management" sign would help a lot. Not only is it a distraction, it affects the meaning of the image. |
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06/10/2004 06:42:13 PM |
could crop better. crop out the sign |
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06/09/2004 12:23:20 PM |
The message conveys "waiting," but the surrounding elements (especially the big banner) are highly distracting. Sound concept. The woman in the shawl conveys waiting really well, perhaps a tight closeup, next time? |
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06/09/2004 11:37:07 AM |
clearly waiting -- perhaps for world peace? I understand why you left it without the crop (i.e. to leave in the bus stop sign), but I think it's a better picture asthetically without the the 'under new management sign... nice shot. |
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06/09/2004 10:50:53 AM |
I think maybe you should of cropped out the top sign. Your colors are nice. |
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06/09/2004 07:29:54 AM |
certainly interesting. The sign above, the two figures waiting. |
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06/08/2004 08:15:18 PM |
A great candid displaying two cultures, definitely conveys "waiting" especially with the fact that they are "doing something". Great job... |
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