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10/08/2009 12:39:14 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
First of all, congrats on a new personal best. This one was well deserved.
My thoughts on the image: I love it. These form-type nudes are absolutely among my favorites. The clarity and sharpness you captured here make this a very dramatic and strong image when paired with the lighting you chose. Well seen and very well executed.
My ideas for improvement: Perhaps the only thing that I would have shot for is a bit deeper depth of field. I'd also like to see the right breast and nipple in crisp focus as well.
Where I would have/did score this entry: Had I voted in the challenge, this would have been one of the few 9s or 10s I would have handed out. Congrats again on a new personal best, as well as a well-deserved top 5 finish.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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10/07/2009 02:24:15 AM |
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10/05/2009 06:45:49 PM |
Excellent image. One of my top pick's and favorite for the challenge. Congrats on 5th. |
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10/05/2009 12:23:29 PM |
I love this. Its beautiful, one of my favorites.
I also love the song :) |
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10/01/2009 05:07:12 PM |
I would have cropped tighter at the bottom, maybe work this into a square crop. The clarity, lighting and play with the water droplets is stunning. /8 |
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10/01/2009 04:22:30 PM |
Excellent lighting and the water beads add a nice touch. |
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10/01/2009 11:18:55 AM |
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10/01/2009 10:03:39 AM |
BEAUTIFULLLLLLLL!I hope you get the blue ribbon! |
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09/30/2009 12:42:30 PM |
I couldn't decide if this was nurse or if you were referring to breast feeding. Seeing a portion of the neck was disturbing. |
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09/30/2009 08:34:22 AM |
perfect light, love te compo |
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09/29/2009 05:32:09 PM |
You drunk her dry - huh? Guess there's always some sweat to lick ;):) |
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09/29/2009 04:12:49 AM |
Very nice. Great lighting with a nice effect off the water droplets. I think it would be a small improvement though to have less prominence to the ribcage below the left breast. Perhaps a little lower camera angle or a little less arch in the back. |
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09/28/2009 12:53:41 PM |
Not bad, I like the water droplets. I do have a feeling I personally would have liked it better in b/w though. |
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09/28/2009 08:50:41 AM |
Great close-pic showing detail. Good use of shadow and lighting. |
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09/28/2009 08:13:10 AM |
I think this is the best of the challenge and should be in the top 3. The lighting was perfect. (10) |
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09/27/2009 11:27:40 PM |
Your pping on this shot is quite good indeed! I do question if the amount of sweat/water beads is too much or not ........ like the shadows and the tonal range but think if you included more of the person the composition would be stronger. |
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09/27/2009 08:55:32 PM |
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09/27/2009 07:46:05 PM |
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09/27/2009 02:26:57 AM |
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09/26/2009 04:39:32 AM |
This is a nurse's uniform? Must be one of those private hospitals. 7 |
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09/26/2009 12:52:22 AM |
Lucky you! I didn't get this kind of nurse! I like the sweat beads and perky nipples. |
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09/25/2009 09:59:33 PM |
The abstractness of this is beautiful. I love the way the form and the shadow play interact and blend to black. You've chosen a nice crop for this as well. Very nicely done! |
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09/25/2009 04:52:04 AM |
good lighting nice angle one of my favs in the challenge , hope it ribbons |
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09/24/2009 10:08:12 PM |
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09/24/2009 08:51:35 PM |
Beautiful form. I find these types of shots usually look better in a landscape crop. |
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