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06/15/2004 06:27:56 PM |
| I like the angst and pain on the face of the protagonist. THe guy walking in the back is distracting |
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06/15/2004 04:49:05 AM |
| focus is a bit blurry on this one - would be better if it was a bit sharper. |
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06/14/2004 06:56:22 PM |
| I was nicked on the last challenge I entered for cutting too close to a birds beak.... likewise, you have cut off the end of the subject's shoe. While this does not detract from the theme capture, I think this would be better executed without the guy's foot cut off. |
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06/12/2004 09:59:29 AM |
| A little soft. I might have tried croipping further to the left. |
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06/11/2004 02:44:55 AM |
| i imagine you might get a variety of comments on this one mentioning blur, focus, grain - but i like how it all works together here. although, to be picky - it does seem a little tilted - intentional or not, i think i'd prefer it slightly more level. nice. |
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06/10/2004 09:48:55 AM |
| I'd reconsider the border and try for sharper focus. STill, a nice candid shot. |
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06/09/2004 11:49:41 PM |
| The composition is great, but it seems a little out of focus. |
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06/09/2004 02:42:23 PM |
| Yep - he looks like he's waiting. But you should have waited just a bit longer - until the gent walking away didn't merge with the main model. Sky is very white, which is unfortunate. Good pose - works very well in black and white. |
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06/09/2004 12:12:31 PM |
| While the pose sells the waiting message, the corner (which doesn't sell the waiting message) takes up 3/4th of the image. |
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06/09/2004 08:01:55 AM |
would also have looked nice with negative space in front, to the left of him and
less pillar? just a thought. |
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06/09/2004 12:27:12 AM |
| A little too tightly cropped on the left |
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06/08/2004 10:16:40 PM |
| nice picture, bit out of focus alas. |
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06/08/2004 09:12:39 PM |
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06/08/2004 08:07:36 PM |
| Nice composition... good texture. |
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