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09/23/2009 12:16:10 AM |
Originally posted by ericwoo:
The selective focus works well in your image, but the 9 is very difficult to see right away. I like the muted tones you captured, but the narrow, rectangle crop gives this one an awkward appearance. In addition, it is cropped too much in from the right hand side, nearly touching the lemon. A neat still life, but this one is a definite challenge shoehorn. Even still, with a better crop I wouldn't have hesitated to give it a strong score. As it is, I score it a 4. |
Thanks for the constructive comments ericwoo and everyone else. Initially, I didn't want to just take a photo of a '9' or nine items as I wanted to try to make it a little more interesting - so that is why it's not necessarily easy to see the nine right away.
I agree with the comment about the narrow crop, unfortunately, with the rose and lemon being placed on my tiled window sill, a less narrow crop would have had resulted in unsighlty detail in the corners so I chose the lesser of two evils as I saw it.
As for being a shoehorn, I can understand that critisism as it was a bit of a bodge! Having looked at the other submissions, I have seen that there are certainly ways to make an interesting and beautiful picture from seemingly ambiguous and less inspiring subject matter.
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09/22/2009 08:33:42 PM |
| Smart idea. I would have liked to see the lemon more in focus, since it is the larger roundness for the 9. But this way the image flows better. |
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09/22/2009 02:59:57 PM |
| Beautiful picture but a shoe horn, so 1. |
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09/21/2009 01:36:50 PM |
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09/20/2009 06:37:37 PM |
| I lkie the texture and colors of the rose. Although used for the "nine" configuration, the orange is the weak part of the composition. |
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09/19/2009 08:10:45 AM |
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09/16/2009 05:56:35 PM |
| The selective focus works well in your image, but the 9 is very difficult to see right away. I like the muted tones you captured, but the narrow, rectangle crop gives this one an awkward appearance. In addition, it is cropped too much in from the right hand side, nearly touching the lemon. A neat still life, but this one is a definite challenge shoehorn. Even still, with a better crop I wouldn't have hesitated to give it a strong score. As it is, I score it a 4. |
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09/16/2009 01:05:06 PM |
Bitter-Sweet '9'...!?
Looked at this and thought DNMC lol,then realised how very clever this shot is!!:-) |
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09/16/2009 12:14:48 PM |
| I don't really understand the connection to the challenge... |
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