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09/07/2009 12:18:23 PM |
The captured bird looks nice but the intruding flowers are very distracting. Having the bird a little more to the left and with the flower not overlapping would have made a huge difference. |
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09/06/2009 02:05:21 PM |
Outstanding!! I can totally appreciate this shot.. 11+ |
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09/05/2009 02:36:51 PM |
The obvious fault here is the white flower in the way. Doesn't make for a great shot. But the bird is looking good. Very hard to get this type of shot i'm sure. |
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09/02/2009 11:21:42 AM |
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09/01/2009 02:51:05 AM |
Composition isn't pleasing. The heron(?) is too centered, the flower blocks the center of the bird. Might have tried stepping to your left to compose the flowers off the bird. Since the bird is looking to the left, may have tried to compose the bird to the right a bit more (rule of thirds), so that the bird is looking into the frame. IMHO. On a positive note, you captured great texture and color of the feathers and the eye and beak. |
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