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06/21/2004 03:19:33 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Hi and welcome to DPC! I see this is your first challenge and you did very well!
This is a lovely shot and most of the comments I would make have already been made during the challenge. The slightly out of focus wing on the upper right is very distracting to me. But the rest of the shot is amazing considering the circumstances under which it was taken. A slightly tighter crop might also help with the over all feel of the shot and maybe straighten it up just a touch.
Otherwise, excellent capture!
Good Luck In Future Challenges!
Deannda
DNeufer@stny.rr.com if you have any questions or want to discuss this further! |
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06/16/2004 10:02:47 AM |
Thanks for the comments im only 17 and just started out at photography any criticisms are excepted and i will use them to make my tecnique more consistant.
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06/15/2004 05:25:23 PM |
Nice butterfly shot, but not quite focussed, mostly on upper right wing. Nice DOF apart from that, although somewhat grainy. |
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06/15/2004 04:35:42 PM |
It's a very pretty butterfly, but I've never known them to wait around. ;) I like the detail you got on the "fur" |
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06/15/2004 03:48:41 PM |
I like this pic and the butterfly is beutyfull nice colors |
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06/15/2004 04:37:49 AM |
1 of my 3 10's in this challenge! |
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06/15/2004 12:23:48 AM |
Extremely lovely butterfly picture. The colors are beautiful. To my mind, though, it wouldn't convey waiting at all except for the title. |
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06/13/2004 02:22:35 AM |
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06/10/2004 05:34:19 AM |
Nice colors! I would prefer the background a bit more blurred and abstract though. As it is now, the plants in the background are just slightly out of focus and my eyes and brain keep trying to make out the details making it hard to look at. |
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06/09/2004 12:21:00 PM |
The image doesn't clearly convey "waiting." Otherwise a very good, vivid moth picture. |
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06/09/2004 10:28:47 AM |
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06/09/2004 08:00:08 AM |
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06/09/2004 06:33:33 AM |
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