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09/01/2009 03:55:09 PM |
Hi from the C Club
you asked for your shot in the abstract macro to have an in depth comment from a member of the Critique Club.
First off, great shot. It isn't really macro enough to be called a macro though. Maybe really zooming in on the twisted metal would have achieved this. Also, your first peg is not in alignment with the other pegs and makes the eye go up and down, which does not help the composition.
Your POV is good, and your DOF is good. The only thing I would have done differently in this is the crop. Post processing is great.
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08/29/2009 10:52:26 AM |
| To me, it's not a true macro - more of a close-up. However, it's a wonderful find and observation. Most importantly, it's an awesome photo: 9 |
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08/27/2009 04:58:01 PM |
| Nice - the lines and flow are great on this. |
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08/27/2009 09:14:42 AM |
| Some finely lit clothespins there. |
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08/27/2009 01:06:04 AM |
| an abstract image is not representing or imitating external reality or the objects of nature |
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08/26/2009 07:20:33 AM |
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08/26/2009 07:06:38 AM |
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08/24/2009 06:21:53 PM |
| excellent idea...you will have to remember this for "numbers", love the texture and the lines, but IMO it is not "abstract" enough to me...sorry |
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08/23/2009 08:10:19 PM |
I remember in high school that if anyone was caught with "69" drawn on their paper book covers, they'd get suspended. LOL
I really like the tones and graphic feel of this. |
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