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Challenge: Pink II (Basic Editing)
Camera: Sony DSLR-A200
Lens: Sony DT 18-70mm f/3.5-5.6 Aspherical ED Zoom Lens for Sony Alpha
Location: Des Moines Zoo
Date: Aug 15, 2009
Aperture: f/13
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/60 sec
Galleries: Nature, Birds
Date Uploaded: Aug 18, 2009

Shot at the Blank Park zoo in Des Moines, IA. Took several shots of these guys. It was kinda hard because they were all huddled under the tree because a keeper was in the area. On the way out I swung by them again (we were in a hurry because rain was coming and we were hungry) and snapped a few shots. They were still mostly under the tree. I think there were nests there. Aparently some babies hatched 4 days earlier and were in there but I didn't see any. A few had come out so I tried by best to get some shot before my wife drug me out by my camera strap. This was actually the last shot I took at the zoo that day.

Statistics
Place: 110 out of 161
Avg (all users): 4.8070
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 4.6316
Avg (non-participants): 4.8947
Views since voting: 596
Views during voting: 270
Votes: 171
Comments: 5
Favorites: 1 (view)


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09/22/2009 09:27:44 PM
Too bad you had to rush this one. Taken the time, you would have probably seen a more pleasing composition, shapes and background. The foreground doesn't do it justice. Maybe zooming close to the two birds, cutting out some of the branches...

When you hand-hold, it does suffer from a handshake. Then when you try to fix it in postprocessing, it actually hurts the image, because sharpening increases the contrast and blows out highlights, etc. (I know it is hard to drag your tripod everywhere - I don't do it either). The worst thing is being rushed by our kids or spouses that are not particularly interested in photography and don't understand that we need to take our time, right?

If you get a chance, go back there and redo your photos. You've already learned some from this experience, so going back usually is fun and produces better results.

Also, you would greatly benefit by becoming a member so you can do more in post-processing in challenges that allow it. It actually taught me a lot more about my style of shooting and I realized in post-processing there is only so much you can fix, so it makes you a better shooter :-))
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08/28/2009 02:54:11 PM
Greetings from Andi via the Critique Club

First Impression: Rather than being drawn to the Flamingoes my eyes keep settling on the grass and its quite distracting for me.

Composition: I think the almost central subjects work well here with just the right amount of foreground and an interesting background, maybe a slightly lower perspective would have helped remove some of the boring middle ground.

Subject: Yup, Flamingoes are pink, a good/obvious choice for the challenge and meets it well. Yes, there were a few in the challenge but you didn't need to get 'that' comment (they left similar on several shots and should be ignored imho).

Technical: I think the technicals are what hurt your score, too much of the main subjects are blown and not very sharp. Not sure of your post processing but what looks like too much shadow/highlight has been applied resulting in odd colours in the bg birds and the great looking branches hanging down. The foreground grass is an odd colour and looks over sharpened.

Final thoughts: With some better editing this image could/should have scored higher than a 5.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/20/2009 08:43:31 PM
OOOOOOH HOW ORIGINAL
08/18/2009 10:15:26 PM
appears you may have over sharpened a bit in an effort to cover soft focus. jmho
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08/18/2009 10:11:04 PM
I like this best of the flamingo shots.
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