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08/24/2009 11:32:42 AM |
(Finally) Greetings from Andi via the Critique Club
First Impression: A rather tenuous title for me though I might have missed the Orchestra bit in this pic? This might never be seen hanging on somebodies wall but the more I view it the more pleasing both the colours and texture are.
Composition:At first the slighty wonky wall bothered me but its a great off centre divider between the tunnel and sign. I like the amount of tunnel, not too much and not too little - just right for me and think you'd have scored higher in the tunnel/cave challenge (even though I much prefer the image you settled on. Everything here fits well.
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Technical:At F2 you kept the 2 sides of the wall and tunnel in a nice sharp focus and let the foreground blur. Good detail in the tunnel and the overall exposure is spot on for me.
Final thoughts: Well, I like it and guess there is no need to tell you that the majority of voters were not as welcoming. |
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08/23/2009 11:06:20 AM |
| Don, this came up for a critique but can't do it tonight and it will dissapear after rollover so am leaving a comment to register and will pop back tomorrow to critique :) |
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08/19/2009 08:33:44 AM |
| Love the colors here, and the textures. The sign does appear to be levitated. Perhaps that is the 'magic'. I think it was lost on most voters though. The image is great, I think the voters just didn't connect it well with the challenge. |
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08/18/2009 05:27:04 PM |
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08/17/2009 09:23:21 AM |
| I see the yellow, of course, but what is the magic part of this? |
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08/15/2009 10:41:22 AM |
| Nice textures. I might have shown a bit more of the entrance to the tunnel. |
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08/13/2009 05:51:40 PM |
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08/12/2009 06:22:15 PM |
| Lots of great stuff to look at here. Cool textures and shapes. |
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