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08/19/2009 08:45:49 AM |
| I love the color of the wood. I think it would benefit from having the right side cropped a bit, removing the distracting light at the side of the building, and bringing the subject more off-center. Her outfit overpowers the blond hair, and I\'m suspecting that may have effected the score. I like the mystery of this shot: Why is she dressed like that in that location? Why is she leaning like that against the wall? What is on her mind? |
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08/19/2009 05:24:06 AM |
Hi from the C Club
Good name shot , well done
The colours are over saturated making her tights a shocking pink which look almost luminous, the skin tones are fairly yellow/orangy. The boots are to die for though!!
you have an interesting background that really brings out your subject, a tighter crop would have helped with this shot, especially on the right hand side all the way to the window.
Your details are good on teh wood, very nicely done |
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08/19/2009 01:59:55 AM |
| A nice shot - a simple composition with a very pretty model - but the saturation is extreme, especially in the face where her skin almost appears orangish-pink and the details appear to be lacking a bit from the model and the wall. I wonder if a slightly tighter crop on the right (to remove the small amount of sky) would have helped you out a bit on placing her more at the right third. |
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08/18/2009 09:50:19 PM |
| Placed way lower than I anticipated, but it may have lost some detail and clarity in the downsize to 640 pixels. At the size you originally showed it to me, I had figured it for a high 5 with no problem. (Of course, I have been known to be wrong before.) |
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08/15/2009 07:40:41 PM |
| I see you went with the recognizable name. It's a great shot. (No vote, comment only) |
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