Author | Thread |
|
08/01/2009 12:36:17 PM |
If you're looking for a more constructive critique, I would say the biggest thing for me is the lighting. It's a bit harsh, so maybe try using a diffuser, it doesn't have to be anything fancy, and old sheet will do the trick. Also there are shadows in the eyes. The eyes are usually the most important part of a portrait, so I would try moving the light/or model, so some light fills in the shadows around the eyes. One more thing. For me personally it looks like the magazine takes up to much of the picture, so I would either back up a bit, or lower the magazine a tad. I hope this is helpful. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
07/27/2009 02:38:44 PM |
I guess you didn't see the humor in my comment. Sorry about that |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
07/23/2009 04:06:42 PM |
Maybe you'll learn what speed film to use for portraits ;) |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
07/23/2009 08:43:23 AM |
nice shot, tells a story. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
07/20/2009 07:01:04 PM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
07/20/2009 07:26:57 AM |
I'll bet there is still plenty of good info in that old issue which still applies. The technology changes, the basics of a good shot don't. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
07/19/2009 08:48:43 PM |
funny shot, I don't think it flies as a portrait because the subject is cut off (wilson from "home improvement"?) but it's high quality and made me laugh, 6 |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/08/2025 09:47:06 AM EDT.