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07/21/2009 09:23:15 PM |
I actually submitted this purposely, to see if it fit into the theme, I knew it didn't, but thought It possibly be accepted...oh well, whatta ya gonna do. |
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07/21/2009 08:50:35 PM |
Critique Club
First, I enjoyed your portfolio, plenty of good work. Particularly this!
FIRST IMPRESSION:
Does not grab, as you said, bit out of the box for what I was expecting for street.
COMPOSITION:
Excellent. The right building is positioned well. The inclusion of the distant buildings buried in dark hurts IMO.
TECHNICAL:
I really like the way you capture the detailed lighting of the main building. Highlights it's texture. Drawback...the bright lights far off on the leading lines. Visual competition!
You know, when I sit here looking through the photograph, I'm drawn to the architecture of the main building, and for that reason it does not feel *street*. But you knew that based on your comments in the description. :)
Cheers,
Ben
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07/20/2009 10:25:55 AM |
I wouldn't say this falls under street photography. |
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07/17/2009 11:00:40 PM |
Nice night shot. Would have liked it cropped a little more at the top. |
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07/15/2009 04:17:09 AM |
Too far away to show the people and what they are doing. I like the light on the building to the right. |
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07/14/2009 09:06:22 PM |
Looks like a set of miniatures.... I really like the color balance and how it doesn't quite seem like night. Would love to see this image at a larger scale. Gonna go with a 9 GL |
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