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07/24/2009 07:04:20 AM |
Critique Club Critique
First Impressions
Interesting scene, with good potential, not sure this couple give the edge it needs. I do like the contrast of words (ACTIVE) and age of the couple. Colors work quite well.
Photograph Information, Technicals & Composition Review
You really like the image, that's the main thing. Composition is difficult, because the 'driveway' is your frame.
Comments, Score & Placement Review
41/135 and 5.52 is pretty good for this Challenge. You have a lot of praise in your comments, so a lot of people liked this.
Summary
I like the scene and the colors, well seen, I like how you've framed it - but the candids, together, don't quite pack enough punch for me. |
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07/22/2009 04:08:58 AM |
| I really like this shot and IMO it should have done much better |
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07/21/2009 10:39:02 PM |
| Nicely framed disconnect. |
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Comments Made During the Challenge  |
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07/19/2009 03:56:58 PM |
| Speaks volumes! Well framed and captured. |
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07/17/2009 04:22:52 PM |
| Great eye here! A daring shot, not sure how voters overall will score it, but I find it quite interesting, and I like it. The people there make it for me, not just any people, but these specific 2. THere is quite the dynamics going on with them. Their age, and the red clothing tie them together, yet their position, body placement etc, create a pulling apart tension. Pretty cool, nicely done. |
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07/17/2009 03:11:19 AM |
| I like the color in this photo |
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07/16/2009 01:23:42 AM |
| a little bit lost perhaps, nice photo |
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07/14/2009 09:32:56 PM |
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07/14/2009 09:22:53 PM |
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07/14/2009 08:51:11 PM |
| I like the way the people are connected by the colour of their clothing but disconnected by their body language very nice. |
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