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Challenge: Trains & Railroads II (Basic Editing)
Collection: 5's
Camera: Olympus E-520
Lens: Olympus 40-150mm f/3.5-4.5 Zuiko Digital
Date: Apr 12, 2009
Galleries: Black and White, Travel
Date Uploaded: Apr 14, 2009

The Station
by Robert J. Hastings

Tucked away in our subconscious is an idyllic vision. We see ourselves on a long trip that spans the continent. We are traveling by train. Out the windows we drink in the passing scene of cars on nearby highways, of children waving at a crossing, of cattle grazing on a distant hillside, of smoke pouring from a power plant, of row upon row of corn and wheat, of flatlands and valleys, of mountains and rolling hillsides, of city skylines and village halls.

But uppermost in our minds is the final destination. On a certain day at a certain hour we will pull into the station. Bands will be playing and flags waving. Once we get there, so many wonderful dreams will come true and the pieces of our lives will fit together like a completed jigsaw puzzle. How restlessly we pace the aisles, damning the minutes for loitering - waiting, waiting, waiting for the station.

"When we reach the station, that will be it!" we cry. "When I'm 18." "When I buy a new 450SL Mercedes Benz!" "When I put the last kid through college." "When I have paid off the mortgage!" "When I get a promotion." "When I reach the age of retirement, I shall live happily ever after!"

Sooner or later we must realize there is no station, no one place to arrive at once and for all. The true joy of life is the trip. The station is only a dream. It constantly outdistances us.

"Relish the moment" is a good motto, especially when coupled with Palm 118:24: "This is the day which the Lord hath made; we will rejoice and be glad in it." It isn't the burdens of today that drive men mad. It is the regrets over yesterday and the fear of tomorrow. Regret and fear are twin thieves who rob us of today.

So, stop pacing the aisles and counting the miles. Instead, climb more mountains, eat more ice cream, go barefoot more often, swim more rivers, watch more sunsets, laugh more, cry less. Life must be lived as we go along. The station will come soon enough.



Statistics
Place: 67 out of 168
Avg (all users): 5.4186
Avg (commenters): 6.8000
Avg (participants): 5.4493
Avg (non-participants): 5.4041
Views since voting: 910
Views during voting: 371
Votes: 215
Comments: 6
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04/28/2009 10:25:22 PM
Hey Terry, this was a nice shot. Should have done better. Maybe not seeing the fact brought it down a tad (I gave ya a 6). The story in your post adds to the image, but of course not something the voters could see or appreciate.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/21/2009 03:18:15 AM
Whilst I love that you have incorporated a human element into your picture I find the pose quite unatural and a little wierd, sitting at the side of the rail would have perhaps articulated the story more comfortably perhaps. All IMHO of course. Best of luck for the challenge.
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04/19/2009 02:29:20 PM
There is a time to comment and there is a time where a reviwer just has to shut up and vote. A complete technical and artistic success.
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04/18/2009 05:42:40 AM
Nice shot, I think that the top could've been crop a little, or maybe a different angle. JMO!
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04/16/2009 05:10:08 AM
I think this shot would be stronger for me if the camera was more down at the person's eye level instead of so far above.
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04/14/2009 10:46:57 PM
Good idea, but even better if we could see the person's facial expression and hands. I think hand and facial expressions can speak volumes in photos.
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