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04/17/2009 12:26:03 PM |
**Critique Club**
I think a few of your commenters hit the nail on the head. It's a good shot, but it doesn't really feel like a postcard. Darn those pesky challenge details! Meeting the challenge aside, I really think it's well done. Some of the white may be blown, but it looks fine to me. I think the puffy clouds complement the snow quite well, and I like the negative space at the top. I too think it could be a Coke add. In a different challenge this could score a lot higher. The only thing I don't like is the bit of snow behind the left foot. It ruins the illusion that he's sitting at the apex of a humongous mound of snow.
If you have any questions or comments please feel free to shoot me a PM.
Nathan
Message edited by author 2009-04-21 10:24:33. |
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04/11/2009 04:32:20 PM |
We are not having sponsored product placement on DPC now, are we? |
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04/09/2009 07:07:15 PM |
this makes me want to have a zip of coke....excellent idea for a coke ad. |
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04/08/2009 02:08:04 PM |
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04/07/2009 12:00:00 PM |
I really like this shot,great angle, would be nice to know where exactly your chillin though! |
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04/06/2009 11:23:41 PM |
Seems more like a Coca Cola ad page than a postcard... |
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04/06/2009 09:52:00 PM |
a little overexposed imo the snow is blown (inevitably) |
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04/06/2009 04:15:19 PM |
Very whimisical and effective. As a statement of time, it works very well - place also depending on what would be on the back. Different from the norm in this challenge and well thought out. |
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04/06/2009 01:32:04 PM |
Nice concept. Wished there was a bit more contrast. Levels or an unsharp mask to remove a bit of fog possibly? 7 because the concept is great. |
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04/06/2009 07:49:37 AM |
great shot but looks more like a Coke ad than a postcard. 7 |
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04/06/2009 06:06:50 AM |
This is interesting but borderlines more on a greeting card for me then a post card. I would have liked to know where he was chillin`. I like the concept tho. |
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04/05/2009 08:14:00 PM |
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