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03/17/2009 11:26:45 AM |
| I think the model is beautiful but the lighting is not diffused enough and the shadow is distracting. |
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03/16/2009 09:27:49 PM |
| Nice close up. Interesting use of light to draw us into the subject. |
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03/16/2009 01:28:48 PM |
| personally I do not like "flash" photography to much...there is such "flair" and "shadows" that you get when you use them... |
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03/16/2009 09:12:48 AM |
| Good idea. The lighting is a bit to hard. Good shot. |
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03/16/2009 07:35:44 AM |
| The flash made a shadow that is very unattractive in this shot, as well as making very harsh "hot spots." Maybe try bouncing the flash. A very attractive woman, so definitely worth trynig again. |
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03/16/2009 06:43:19 AM |
| There is potential here but the on-camera flash really hurts the exposure. She's a very pretty girl with nice eye coloring. This looks like an un-posed shot or between poses. She would make some great shots with diffused flash and a little more posing. |
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03/15/2009 08:54:16 PM |
| Beautiful girl, though the shadow from the flash is unfortunate. |
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03/15/2009 08:12:42 PM |
| This has elements of a fine photo ... pretty model, decent enough pose. It looks like she was right in front of the wall. Next time ... you might try moveing her several feet away from it to manage the harsh shadow. |
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03/15/2009 07:33:07 PM |
| Hard shadow spoils this a little. |
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03/15/2009 06:02:46 PM |
| She is beautiful ... A little harsh with the lighting though |
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03/15/2009 12:17:48 PM |
| the flash and shadows are just too distracting here. She kinda looks like Rihanna though |
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03/15/2009 11:42:00 AM |
| Direct light is a bit harsh and I don't think it does much for this image. |
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03/15/2009 11:08:28 AM |
| interesting idea, but thinking the overexposure on the arm is a bit too much |
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03/15/2009 06:49:41 AM |
| the shadow from the direct flash does not flatter the model at all |
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03/15/2009 06:37:00 AM |
| Great crop and pose and I love the skin tone and focus. The lighting is a bit harsh, though and could use a fill light to get rid of that shadow. |
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03/15/2009 04:36:01 AM |
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03/15/2009 04:30:05 AM |
| This needs better lighting, focus and background. |
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03/15/2009 02:49:23 AM |
is it self-portrait? :)
well its not lit very well ... that flash didnt help it I think... but still nice model lol :D
thx, brano |
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03/14/2009 07:39:36 PM |
| She is a pretty girl. Try shooting further away from the background, then you won't get those strong shadows. |
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03/14/2009 05:18:22 PM |
| Lighting is a bit harsh for my taste |
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03/14/2009 04:28:12 PM |
| There are so many elements that are off here I'm not going to list them all. She's a beautiful woman if you can learn some techniques to improve this shot I'd reshoot her. |
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03/14/2009 03:17:00 PM |
| A bit too harsh light, blown highlihts. |
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03/14/2009 02:13:43 PM |
| This is an odd position, very harsh lighting. Lovely model. |
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03/14/2009 12:20:28 PM |
| Gorgeous model, but the lighting setup needs improving - I guess you were using a single flash, possibly on camera which makes it hard to avoid very hash lighting. You have the model close to the backdrop and unfortunately with single small flash that throws a harsh shadow onto it. I think there's a really good shot waiting to get out here - perhaps using some diffuse light from a window instead of flash will yield a much softer look which would really suit this model. |
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03/14/2009 07:41:17 AM |
| Very pretty model, but the lighting is too harsh - especially on the arm, and back of the chair. The highlight on her hair is great (since it is so dark). Her cheek is a bit hot, but I think that'd be OK if the arm wasn't so hot. |
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03/14/2009 06:49:00 AM |
| I'm sorry, the light seems way too heavy and the close shadow doesn't add anything IMO. I'd soften the light and move her away from the background. The angle also makes her arm look very heavy. |
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03/14/2009 01:01:36 AM |
| Nice portrait, although the light and shadows are very heavy. |
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03/13/2009 06:28:38 PM |
A bit of carefully applied gaussian blur would help this pic quite a bit. Not so much on her, but more on the BG. Lines in the sheet and that nasty looking pleather on the chair.
She looks lovely and I like her pose and expression |
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03/13/2009 02:52:10 PM |
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03/13/2009 12:17:22 PM |
She does look ready for the closeup... but it looks like the photographer wasn't quite ready. The flash is blowing out parts of her skin and leaving harsh, distracting shadows on the background.
I think this would have been beautiful with natural lighting or lighting from other than straight on, with the subject farther away from the background (to blur it a bit and not see shadows) and to get rid of the black chair... perhaps replacing it with something more attractive, or just readjust her pose to cover her parts without any chair. :)
Not voting yet. |
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03/13/2009 08:39:42 AM |
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03/12/2009 11:54:41 PM |
shadows behind are a pity
but nice sharpness and very pretty woman |
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03/12/2009 06:14:38 PM |
| Beautiful model, but the sharp lighting needs to be just a bit softer |
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03/12/2009 05:11:58 PM |
| harsh light and shadows.. very un-flattening |
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03/12/2009 04:12:54 PM |
| Don´t think the flash adds anything to this, try bounce it off the wall |
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03/12/2009 04:07:22 PM |
| Beautiful model. Could use a bit of fill flash. |
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03/12/2009 03:36:38 PM |
| To much light and harsh shadows. Tones are off to but I do love her face. She has a very nice facial features. |
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03/12/2009 12:26:46 PM |
| Lovely model. I don't like the harsh lighting and the shadows. There's also vignetting in the corners. |
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03/12/2009 12:18:08 PM |
| Like her expresion, the use of a light difusser would've been perfect here. |
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03/12/2009 11:24:58 AM |
| Nice model and pose for the portrait, however I think a softer light would have been much better for it. |
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03/12/2009 08:27:07 AM |
| Pretty girl.....on camera flash is not the most flattering light. |
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03/11/2009 06:14:38 PM |
| i LOVE this. The harsh light makes this photo for me. It looks like an editorial ad in a magazine like Vogue or something. |
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03/11/2009 05:19:31 PM |
| The wrinkled background is quite unappealing. The light is far too bright also, causing overblown spots and a harsh shadow. Next time, try using a less direct light source and an uncreased backdrop. The model is attractive and would make a good subject for further challenges. |
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03/11/2009 02:01:53 PM |
| The lighting is very harsh here. Generally, elbows aren't the best thing to have as a focal point/on the rule of thirds. Keep working on the lighting, and pay attention to wrinkles in backgrounds for a finished look. |
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03/11/2009 11:10:28 AM |
| Harsh lighting but I think it works well |
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03/11/2009 08:58:48 AM |
| The light is too harsh (built-in flash?) |
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03/11/2009 08:49:46 AM |
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03/11/2009 07:59:25 AM |
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03/11/2009 06:49:47 AM |
| Direct flash is not flattering. Next time try bouncing the flash off the roof, or from the side. |
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03/11/2009 06:20:19 AM |
| Light is awfully harsh here. A diffused or bounced flash would be more flattering to the subject. |
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03/11/2009 06:15:11 AM |
| nice portrait, but the light is harsh, over exposing the subject, the background is uneven/distracting. the chair in front of the subject is also not helping. |
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03/11/2009 06:12:36 AM |
| This would be great with the light shot from the left hand side instead, I feel. |
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03/11/2009 04:23:50 AM |
| Tthe harsh frontal lighting kills this shot; blown lights on the arm and cheek, hard shadows. In addition, the use of a relatively wide-angled lens makes her arm look very bold. Also, the position of her arm produced wrinkles on her shoulder. Overall, the shot is quite unflattering for your otherwise good-looking model. |
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03/11/2009 01:48:40 AM |
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03/11/2009 01:40:50 AM |
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