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02/10/2011 04:57:20 PM |
| This is fabulous and amazing. I love the moment you captured her in. |
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03/26/2009 07:54:31 PM |
| Yeah, I agree. B&W far better for this. I find it funny some of teh comments below about cropping out the durex machine, that fopr me really makes it, another agonising decision for a young girl.......! Great. I'm really surprised this one was rejected, I far as I can see it appears that 1x prefers a story to a technically brilliant photo, this has such a story.....! |
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03/25/2009 02:26:33 AM |
| I like this B&W one better. It really sets off her face.....and the look. Nicely done! |
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03/17/2009 06:41:09 PM |
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03/17/2009 06:10:11 PM |
| Interesting commentary piece, very nicely done. |
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03/17/2009 07:35:31 AM |
| I like the condom dispenser next to her, great juxtoposition, I like this a lot. |
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03/16/2009 09:33:44 PM |
| Nice candid shot. I like the black and white to draw us into the subject. |
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03/16/2009 08:59:26 PM |
| Interesting shot in front of the condom machine. Not totally sure what the intended message is here, except maybe to make me think. Since I have two daughters, the message I get is to lock them up to keep them safe until they are legal age. (Which in my house is 30.) |
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03/16/2009 02:15:38 PM |
| one of the most interesting shots in the challenge... |
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03/16/2009 01:41:10 PM |
| Vulnerability and poise at the cusp of womanhood, well done. |
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03/16/2009 01:09:08 PM |
| Excellent! Is a candid shot, right? 10+ |
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03/16/2009 09:17:20 AM |
| Great "street" capture. This begs of a story. |
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03/16/2009 06:11:44 AM |
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03/16/2009 05:03:34 AM |
| This is an amazing photograph, stunning. Of all the pictures here this is the one that draws me back for another look. The whole composition is perfect. A great capture of a moment. |
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03/15/2009 11:54:17 PM |
| dont know what to say. the condom machine in the background sort of blows it for me with young girls in the shot. probly not the message you want to send |
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03/15/2009 11:44:32 PM |
| her expression speaks volumes fantastic image |
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03/15/2009 09:17:09 PM |
| Definitely a picture can say more than a thousand words. Great capture of the moment. |
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03/15/2009 07:37:58 PM |
| Nice candid shot. The gaze of the one girl is striking. |
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03/15/2009 05:31:50 PM |
| Nice reflection of the face. Not sure that look at the camera is all that friendly. Nice contrasts. |
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03/15/2009 02:52:19 PM |
| Nicely done. the scratch on the mirror is a bit of a distraction, though |
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03/15/2009 02:37:55 PM |
| This is real, only my second high score, brilliant.. |
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03/15/2009 02:27:05 PM |
| great capture! you cant plan those looks. great job |
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03/15/2009 12:40:39 PM |
| One of my favorites from this challenge. Love it. Everything feels right about this photo. |
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03/15/2009 10:30:47 AM |
| Image feels a little over sharpened. The B&W conversion works well here and the elements in this shot resonate with the title. |
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03/15/2009 10:01:28 AM |
| Fantastic shot. Good job on the B&W. 8 |
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03/15/2009 06:12:39 AM |
| A very good candid showing their everyday lives. Good B&W treatment. |
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03/15/2009 05:08:42 AM |
Candide, I suppose!
It's interesting to see in a single photo some aspects of adolescence: the look between rebel and garçonne of the one looking to the viewer, the other girl watching herself in a mirror, even the condom vending machine.
I like the black and white, it's more powerful in this case.
My vote : 8 |
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03/15/2009 01:05:05 AM |
this is what the street photography is about
the right moment, in that category its 9
regards
Brano |
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03/14/2009 09:54:52 PM |
| A fantastic expression on the girl's face, the picture tells a story. Well done! 8. |
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03/14/2009 09:41:36 PM |
| I think I've already commented on this image at some point and now... well I feel like I can't re-comment or it won't have the same honesty the first comment did. :) But I like it. |
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03/14/2009 08:53:21 PM |
| Beautiful girl, this looks completely candid and the B&W works very well. Best of luck. 8 |
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03/14/2009 07:49:40 PM |
| Wonderful portrait with the mirror included. |
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03/14/2009 07:15:24 PM |
| good conversion to black and white, good portrait of adolscence |
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03/14/2009 05:19:00 PM |
| Nice choice for b/w, her gaze is very intense. |
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03/14/2009 04:09:24 PM |
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03/14/2009 02:55:44 PM |
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03/14/2009 02:30:37 PM |
| Wonderful candid shot. Love the expression of the girl, the moment captured and the BW tones. This is a great photography and one of my favorites of this challenge. Good luck! |
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03/14/2009 01:50:46 PM |
| nice expression captured in this shot |
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03/14/2009 07:01:47 AM |
| Nice glob of spit on the mirror :P |
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03/14/2009 06:11:41 AM |
| Great composition. This shot really says quite a lot. Nice job. |
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03/14/2009 05:38:20 AM |
| Superb 'street' capture - bumping to 10. |
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03/14/2009 04:47:37 AM |
| Excellent capture. All the right elements come together to make this an image with a real message and story. The young adolescent girls, the Durex dispensing machine on the wall, the intense direct look from the young girl into the camera. The reflection of the other girls face.And the black and white work is excellent too. Perfect exposure. 8 |
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03/14/2009 02:07:29 AM |
| Great candid, love the message. Well done |
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03/14/2009 12:36:23 AM |
| cool shot , technically very good, conveys the message very well , 7 |
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03/14/2009 12:29:24 AM |
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03/13/2009 08:58:23 PM |
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03/13/2009 06:47:43 PM |
| My fist thought was that I'd like it composed off center, but I don't think so after all. The condom machine definitely adds to the interest, as well as gives my mind absolute placement of the scene. Nicely done, and great tonal range with the BW conversion. |
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03/13/2009 05:42:45 PM |
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03/13/2009 04:44:55 PM |
| Black and white works very good here, well done :) |
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03/13/2009 01:07:52 PM |
| really like how both faces are visable, the machine behind really adds to the picture. 10 |
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03/13/2009 10:43:36 AM |
| Gorgeous candid, I like it very much. |
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03/13/2009 05:48:28 AM |
| very fine capture, you really have nailed the attitude of these young women |
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03/13/2009 02:42:05 AM |
| Very busy photo I think the condom machine is more of a distraction than a help imho. |
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03/13/2009 02:20:48 AM |
| This is an immensely clever photograph; a photograph that is both of something and about that same thing. Sort of documentary and editorial at the same time. Alas it will likely be pitifully underestimated. 9. |
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03/13/2009 01:28:22 AM |
| one of the only photos I have voted on so far that actually works on many levels. I dont need to go into details here. but great observation and capture. |
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03/12/2009 11:50:03 PM |
| The thing about this shot is the girls expression, I can't get past that, it's great |
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03/12/2009 11:17:34 PM |
The scene is interesting (durex and kids), but it's missing something I can't quite define.
Good though. |
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03/12/2009 07:42:11 PM |
| Nice candid, great stare, but the Durex machine gives it a creepy feel. |
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03/12/2009 07:25:43 PM |
| Such a defiant look. Very raw feel to this shot. She really holds center stage, with excellent detail and sharpness. |
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03/12/2009 04:46:35 PM |
| Nice detail and great story. Lovely eyes. |
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03/12/2009 04:43:46 PM |
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03/12/2009 04:27:27 PM |
| Really like this one. Her eyes are penetrating. |
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03/12/2009 03:53:11 PM |
| Great human nature study, love the power of the stare. |
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03/12/2009 03:13:14 PM |
| Brilliant shot, her eyes really suck you in. Beautifully sharp and clear. |
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03/12/2009 03:00:16 PM |
| Nice candid shot, I like the way it tells a story! |
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03/12/2009 11:53:03 AM |
| great over all - (terrific portrait irrespective of the setting) |
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03/12/2009 11:29:57 AM |
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03/12/2009 11:22:52 AM |
| Great expression. Nice shot and clarity. |
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03/12/2009 10:09:31 AM |
| You've really caught the notion of youth. Part grown up, part afraid of growing up. Trying so hard with so little to try with. And trying out attitude. Well captured and presented. |
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03/12/2009 09:00:06 AM |
| Back to comment and bump: Cropping the left side of the image would have made this a 10 for me. Great B&W conversion. 8 |
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03/12/2009 08:31:20 AM |
| Good models,doubious locale |
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03/12/2009 06:09:12 AM |
| a nice gaze, like she's been caught at something, especially given the dispenser on the left. a very photojournalistic quality. |
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03/11/2009 08:08:09 PM |
| Holy Cow - this is so unbelievably WONDERFUL! BRILLIANT! |
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03/11/2009 07:37:05 PM |
| great shot, i really like the natural look. |
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03/11/2009 07:19:54 PM |
| What a great candid moment! |
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03/11/2009 07:17:13 PM |
| Interesting juxtaposition with the condom dispenser and the subjects. It really helps create a message. |
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03/11/2009 03:03:22 PM |
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03/11/2009 12:02:29 PM |
| nice candid shot....love the story going on here.....IMO I might have crop off the left side...placing the eye contact in the top left third......just a thought |
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03/11/2009 11:12:16 AM |
| Nicely cropped (I almost missed the left side of the frame)! Sharp and good decision not to go high-key B&W. |
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03/11/2009 09:45:23 AM |
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03/11/2009 09:27:06 AM |
| is that a condom rack behind them??? Think I might have cropped that out, really like the shot of the girls although |
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03/11/2009 08:02:47 AM |
| Great environmental portrait,love it :) |
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03/11/2009 05:34:39 AM |
| i love her eyes but would have cropped tighter on the left |
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03/11/2009 03:30:16 AM |
| Says it all. Nice candid capture |
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03/11/2009 01:31:20 AM |
| First shot I come across that makes me say WOW |
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