Apparently this is a remake of Trish's "Eggs frying" from the first "sound" challenge. So although this is a very nicely lit and technically superior image, I don't really see it as having any relevance to the original image or the original challenge.
If you're saying you can improve a messy photograph of eggs frying by shooting the unbroken eggs in a basket, well yeah, it's *neater* but it's not even remotely the same image. If you're saying you can better answer the challenge "Sound" (and I'm sure you're not) by photographing intact eggs instead of sizzling, popping, frying eggs, well that obviously is not true.
Had you exhibited the same degree of skill in a shot of eggs actually being fried, and managed to communicate that snap & hiss of overheated grease, thn you might have had a winner, but by the standards on which I'm choosing to judge this callenge, your image is a bit of a shoehorn.
Still, the skill's there, so you get a 6 from me for now. |