You know, the original source image for this one was a surprisingly good shot for a brown ribbon... You're working witht he same elements for sure, using them in a somewhat different way, but you're definitely meeting the challenge.
As far as execution goes, ultimately this image doesn't satisfy me very much, it feels sort of flat, not anywhere near as lively as I'd expect it to be given the elements you're using. The original, on the other hand, for all it's technical imperfections, had a lot of movement and power to it. So for me, while this is technically well done in the sense that it's *freezing* stuff well, it's not really an improvement over the original.
Still, you addressed the challenge directly and you showed good skills. 5 from me. |
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