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01/26/2009 07:11:26 AM |
Originally posted by Jdroullard:
Originally posted by picturesbykim:
I like the concept of this photo. The issue I have is where the light falls. The vanity is in her face, and her obsession with her looks while applying makeup. The light falling on her breasts draws the eye away from her eyes. Has the lighting been different I would have scored higher. |
it's the light that draws the eye there? If you say so... But this should have finished much higher. |
ROFL that is exactly what I was thinking. I know why my eyes were drawn there!
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01/26/2009 05:17:27 AM |
Originally posted by picturesbykim:
I like the concept of this photo. The issue I have is where the light falls. The vanity is in her face, and her obsession with her looks while applying makeup. The light falling on her breasts draws the eye away from her eyes. Has the lighting been different I would have scored higher. |
it's the light that draws the eye there? If you say so... But this should have finished much higher. |
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01/25/2009 05:58:32 PM |
| One of the better entries... nice work - 6 |
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01/25/2009 04:40:25 PM |
| I like the concept of this photo. The issue I have is where the light falls. The vanity is in her face, and her obsession with her looks while applying makeup. The light falling on her breasts draws the eye away from her eyes. Has the lighting been different I would have scored higher. |
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01/24/2009 05:29:37 AM |
| For this challenge, it's a 10 |
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01/21/2009 07:12:58 PM |
| Very nice lighting. Once of my high score. Good luck. |
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01/21/2009 01:15:06 PM |
Hmmm... honestly, I don't get the sense of vanity. When I think of vanity, I think brighter, more vibrant colors. Something extravagant and ostentatious... plenty of make-up objects lying around all at the beckoning call of the subject.
I do like that this is a more intimate, personal picture... I just feel that it sort of detracts from the conveyance of personality, especially "vanity" |
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01/20/2009 03:12:19 PM |
| Very nicely lit from the front and the back. Her pose/posture and the large amount of foreground that she occupies makes her look a little bigger than I think she is (she's a very lovely model). 7 from me. |
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01/20/2009 02:10:15 AM |
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01/19/2009 11:46:02 PM |
| nice shot, would have been better if see had been looking at her self in the mirror but ha we carn't have any thing but all together it is a good picture 7 |
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01/19/2009 08:54:51 PM |
| I love the reflection, but I think this would work better if she were actually looking at herself. |
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01/19/2009 05:49:31 PM |
| A bit more reflection and a little less back of the left shoulder would work better for me. |
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